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06-28-07, 04:13 PM | #1 | ||
I'm Talented.Period.
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"Man, Woman, Child"...new concept from ya boyeee
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http://www.myspace.com/thaqmusic
^Click on "Man, Woman, Child" Beat: Clockwork Productions Hook: Q Verses: 1-3, Q Concept: Imagine 3 people on a track, a man, a woman, and a child. All three are given the opportunity to vent on this one beat. The hook is interesting. I literally couldn't think of anything to go because where the hook is the beat drops out. So, what you hear is what I derived out of sheer frustration with trying to come up with one. I like this song and hope people can feel the vibe of it. Holla 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242969 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3173949 |
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06-30-07, 04:27 PM | #2 | ||
I'm Talented.Period.
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guess this is too intellectual for this site
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06-30-07, 09:20 PM | #3 | ||
I'm Talented.Period.
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Imma up this joint until I get at least 1 reply
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07-01-07, 08:07 PM | #4 | |
New to RV
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put a soundclick one up so i can hear.
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07-01-07, 09:10 PM | #5 | ||
I'm Talented.Period.
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07-02-07, 02:19 PM | #6 | |
New to RV
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Why did you take everything off your soundclick while i was gone...
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07-02-07, 03:41 PM | #7 | ||
I'm Talented.Period.
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WTF does anyone leave feed around here?
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07-04-07, 12:33 AM | #8 | |
Addicted
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this was coo i like the topic.....the beat i proly wuldnt do.....but yea lyrics deliver is all on point....i like how u did that hook........
Overall this was cooll.....good drop homie.... |
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07-10-07, 09:44 PM | #9 | ||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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First of all......do something to your myspace....lol
Well, I'm not really feeling the flow/cadence of this too much to be honest with you man. Your rhyme scheme on this was a little too basic too. I think you took each verse too far man. You had a nice concept but I don't think there's enough room on one track to do what you were intending. You could have made a whole song with any one of the subjects and you tried to shove all three into one song. I think that if you were trying to shove all three points of view into a song you should have made them on the same exact topic, but from each perspective. Anyway, not the best I've heard from you man.......but there was some good.....lol. I really liked the hook. Its simplicity worked well with the beat dropping like that and the production level sounded great throughout. Good shit man
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07-11-07, 10:43 AM | #10 | ||
I'm Talented.Period.
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^^Preciate da feed.
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07-11-07, 10:53 AM | #11 | ||
I see dumb people
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You 30+ and you still on RV? UGHHHHHHH
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07-11-07, 11:51 AM | #12 | |||
I'm Talented.Period.
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Why does my age concern you? Better yet...stay out my thread. 1 |
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07-11-07, 08:45 PM | #13 | ||
I see dumb people
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I'm 19 niggga so is the DUBBSSSSSSS
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07-12-07, 08:37 PM | #14 | ||
inFAMOUS
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07-13-07, 12:06 PM | #15 | ||
L.E
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I did like the concept. Beat was fitting.
The delivery on this track I thought was nice...gave it a kind of desperation for the story. Flow was on point. Lyrics were sketchy in some parts, but overall, they were decent. Good track man. |
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