10 lines..........

due in 45 form checkin..........


~~this is my checkin.............

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Damn… some ‘common sense’ must not be so common-to-u…
Scared of your shadow?…trust me that’s always been Following-u....



TEST me.....you'll soon be ~Sonned~

aiight, my bad for the delay but i'm checkin in so drop on point and let me know what's up.....hopefully you are on line
so get back a.s.a.p. alright

Sorry for the wait but I'm here to drop.....

Rip-in ya insides/got u all tied and corked
who's behind the operation/ of yo life cut short
u could call it mad cow/a chicken owl or pork
it don't matter,/cuz you're eating whatever u poked with your fork
what's on the table is subliminal/i'm a maktrix reloaded criminal
only way they'll trace your rhymes/ is if they look it up in digital
I'll hit front page of the sentinel /and call it a job complete
could'nt call yaself hard /if you dried inta concrete
but talks cheap,/ fuck around drop a couple pounds on yo feet
jump lil twit /and you have jumped to ya final seat
you ain't goin no- where/ after- opposing me
cuz i bring pain to yo day/ like pulling your nose ring
don't come with rainbow(GAY) jokes
that's for online computer bangers
cuz your shit'll get hung up/ like multi colored clothes hangers



Honest votes with explonations and if possible a break down

mine was de-layed to.... its straight....

..........................::Massacre'~'De~livered: :.....................................

‘Commense ‘~ when left-dense, ‘Inspect’ ~ ya found fake-ness
your made-tense, no pennies in ur lines…. Just to…. make-cents* (sense),
Sweatin-immense, defi’n-‘this-mean‘, I’ma slice~an~dice-ya-spleen,
enlighted-this-phene, thought I was fighting… guess im killin-a-queen* (look at the sig)
Then Cover-the-scene, wit Forheads-plied, back in posts an your-flowins-behind, (I got more posts)
Im towin-da-time, as I could beat you up…. Wit both-hands-tied….
U show-I-deny, given an inch ‘~‘ I’l get-a-mile, like u caught taken-my-style,
So~ vile, call you ‘sale item’…. your only nice….. once in-a-while…
In ya-profile,…shoulda been taken-edive.. Sad that ur shit just ain’t-precise,
?You from LA or CA? … u couldn’t be tracked wit a fuckin locating-devICe......(the location)…


~Sonned

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Damn… some ‘common sense’ must not be so common-to-u…
Scared of your shadow?…trust me that’s always been Following-u....



TEST me.....you'll soon be ~Sonned~

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Could it be? ocanti is actually throwin punches, this could be the best battle I've seen from you. not so great opener but great punches, metaphors, and a weird closing but creative and yes I got it. I think there was one played line in there, u got to watch those.
virtuoso your opener was good and then you kind of lost me towards the end, you had a good punch or two but it just did'nt hit as hard. A lot of it did'nyt make sense maybe I'm slow or somethin but watch that and LA CA is Los Angeles, California if I'm not mistaken with what she posted.

But overall, I say ocanti cuz of major elevation in punches and metaphors, structure could be a little better.

Well mr Virtuso got his ass slayed badly his shit seemed as if he was putting words together that did not even move me or not even none of the other voters. Structure sucked major donkey nuts. Flow was hot garbage he sounded like he was trying to hard to kick knowledge.

Vote oCANti defeat vir

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Honest votes please

wat y'all on bout virtuso ripped this kid, jus cos he elevated since his last battle dosent mean he should get the vote. virtuso harder punches, which actually connected!!!



‘Commense ‘~ when left-dense, ‘Inspect’ ~ ya found fake-ness
your made-tense, no pennies in ur lines…. Just to…. make-cents* (sense),


theres jus no comparison

Rip-in ya insides/got u all tied and corked
who's behind the operation/ of yo life cut short


an wtf are u doin, try to sway votes with an alias???

oceanti = fearless wierdo

u sound stupid as fuck, let me guess you're EITHER A DICKRIDER OR A CHEER LEADER WHO SUCKS DICK, WHICH ONE IS IT?
I think his verse was nice but that does not mean mine was shitty and I'm not a fucking guy READ THE DAMN SIGNATURE ONCE IN A WHILE O.K.
Why don't we battle next "alias"?

OCanti slayed virt no questions asked!!!

opener:virt (his came as a battle punch, oc's was more talking about lunch)
Flowc (the flow just was a steady pace and was good)
multiesc (his flow was bang'n and it all came together good)
Metas:virt (wit his vocab he put together good metaphors)
punches:tie (weak on punches)
personalsc (his was a battle verse right off the head. Virt's sounded pre-writen... he could of used that post on any one)
vocab:virt (he spit wit some hard words but forced some of them)
closer:Tie (both lost me!)

My vote went to OC cuz his shit was better i think but my vote doesnt count any ways so who cares!!!

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yea..lol the only polled vote was from a vet..............

lol..................aight uppin.................

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Damn… some ‘common sense’ must not be so common-to-u…
Scared of your shadow?…trust me that’s always been Following-u....



TEST me.....you'll soon be ~Sonned~

ocanti had a halfway decent verse, but vituoso's punches were better. he had good responses and better personals. good wordplay too. so...

vote: Virtuoso

i spent time on your battle, spend time on mine:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102139

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101943