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Old 11-30-07, 02:12 PM   #1
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Retired Styles (Umemployed Diss..I Guess)

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Umemployed sounds more of a retirement crew.
I hope this verse will instigate more of you lazy old-text-heads to drop.
Lets do this.


Now once upon, not very very long ago...
There once was a site could rapbattles so
With a twist and a thrust, no one at gave a fuck
With a style so diverse, It split up from corrupt
Then rapverse was born, and textcees did florish
from the antics of MADDRAPPER...
...to the dopeness of Zig Zag's 'Chuck Norris
Now we have a band of old textcee vet merry men
Fucking gay priests in a dome as they marry men
Who knows what goes on behind those passwords?
In a crew so taboo, i regret revealing those last words
Unemployed, ye reject me, and i've taken to hold it
For I would rather have a job...
...Then have taken the eviction notice
I pop pimps then I prozac, roll cash and whole stamps ...
No Gimmicks here, Im the Real thing with the whole pack
y'all had your shine back when this site was real nice...
It's a shame you've banded to form rapverse's surreal life..
So I'll leave you with sweet thoughts to think of cold 'as' Ice
I would've added Vanila...
...But then I'm giving old styles credit to sound just as nice

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3194754
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=244616
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Old 11-30-07, 04:49 PM   #2
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half that doesn't diss unemployed, you just talk about rv... uhm, half our crew consists of people who joined the site around when rv started, and did alot more on this site than you... uhm overall it just wasn't really a diss, to be honest, nothing stood out, you should've just said it was a key or something so people could give you credit... and yeah, for your links, they have to be from pieces you provided actual legitiment feedback... not just a "nice to see you still have skill" or whatever you said

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Old 11-30-07, 06:10 PM   #3
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half that doesn't diss unemployed, you just talk about rv... uhm, half our crew consists of people who joined the site around when rv started, and did alot more on this site than you... uhm overall it just wasn't really a diss, to be honest, nothing stood out, you should've just said it was a key or something so people could give you credit... and yeah, for your links, they have to be from pieces you provided actual legitiment feedback... not just a "nice to see you still have skill" or whatever you said

stay up


Yeah...it was supposed to start of being a keystyle, but then I remembered I haven't dropped anything negative about unemployed yet.
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Old 11-30-07, 05:27 PM   #4
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Yeh, you suck . Battle me chump.
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Old 11-30-07, 06:08 PM   #5
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Sure...I could use something to excercise my creativity.
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Old 11-30-07, 06:30 PM   #6
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I might re-open the 1-2 punch league at the beginning of January. That's a big maybe though. I just needed to get through Thanksgiving and on Christmas I'm taking a 2 week vacation with AOL as my only source of internet so I was gonna close it before Christmas anyway. But that's not my point, I'm only counting your second link, the first one is feedback of one line, lol. pz
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Old 11-30-07, 06:30 PM   #7
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Originally Posted by Val Shiest.
Umemployed sounds more of a retirement crew.
I hope this verse will instigate more of you lazy old-text-heads to drop.
Lets do this.


Now once upon, not very very long ago...
There once was a site could rapbattles so
Uhh.. what the fuck does this mean?
With a twist and a thrust, no one at gave a fuck
With a style so diverse, It split up from corrupt
That isn't why the split happened.
Then rapverse was born, and textcees did florish
from the antics of MADDRAPPER...
...to the dopeness of Zig Zag's 'Chuck Norris
The Chuck Norris shit was actually Zig's and my idea, then SPuL and JTR were in on it too, so yeah, I'm still dope.
Now we have a band of old textcee vet merry men
Fucking gay priests in a dome as they marry men
Weak.
Who knows what goes on behind those passwords?
In a crew so taboo, i regret revealing those last words
Can tell what you like to imagine goes on behind the password.
Unemployed, ye reject me, and i've taken to hold it
For I would rather have a job...
...Then have taken the eviction notice
This could have been written, "Unemployed, you rejected me, it's taken it's tool to the heart, but If I wasn't so whack maybe they'd let me try and take part.
I pop pimps then I prozac, roll cash and whole stamps ...
No Gimmicks here, Im the Real thing with the whole pack
Uhhh, no?
y'all had your shine back when this site was real nice...
It's a shame you've banded to form rapverse's surreal life..
Only half decent line and it was executed poor as fuck.
So I'll leave you with sweet thoughts to think of cold 'as' Ice
I would've added Vanila...
...But then I'm giving old styles credit to sound just as nice
Choppy and worded terrible/the creativity of that line was weak as fuck.

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3194754
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=244616


Meh, honest feedback, it was whack as fuck.

PS: You're dissing a crew you asked to be in but got rejected, hence making you lower than our level, go write a diss about yourself or something, but write it better than this.
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Old 11-30-07, 10:06 PM   #8
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LMFAO @ the "umemployment" before you clown a crew i'd personally suggest to learn to spell.

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Old 12-01-07, 01:27 PM   #9
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well lets see..we ran the site wen it was bumpin with talent?

how is that a bad thing?

when u and ur crew run the site now...and its whack and dead as fuck...

yup u guys are deff. runn this "SHIT"
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Old 12-01-07, 01:51 PM   #10
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Oh no...And let the bashing begin....
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Old 12-01-07, 02:03 PM   #11
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u set ur self up herb.

try not being whack.
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Old 12-01-07, 03:04 PM   #12
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u set ur self up herb.

try not being whack.


were you ever a herb?
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Old 12-01-07, 03:34 PM   #13
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^^sorry but that response was really pitiful

And this response was a freepost. Keep it in the PMs buddy - 2v

whatever nigga

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Old 12-05-07, 01:36 AM   #14
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cant really say much as i dont know the history bout wot ur talking about,but didnt take to any of it to be honest,wasnt anything great,trying to find a couple of lines that are ai8t but nothing stands out.sure uv got alot better then that.peace
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Old 12-05-07, 03:38 AM   #15
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basically 300jg and best are two crews who've been tryna come at us repeatedly just to make a name for themselves...the fact that we don't generally respond to their poor standard of work frustrates them so they come here making open mics praying that one day any of us will give a fuck enough to pink slip battle them and hope the door don't hit em where the good lord split em

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