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01-21-05, 10:33 PM | #1 | ||
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"Goverment Love Loss"
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"Goverment Love Loss" [HOOKx2] U.S. stealing from their children, brothers and daughters.... .......My mother and Father, damn cant take it no longer politicians dont beileve them, they just huggin' in public..... .......just a love loss of faith, in this strugglin' goverment [Course 1] See the money isnt werkin', and the struggle is hard pops searchin' classifieds, just to muscle a job They abusin' him now, they aint loosin' him now from card tables to bar tables, boozin' him out and he choosin' it loud, screamin' top of his lungz he acknowledge he done, to wife daughter and son there it goes once again, they got another one god please tell me why its money problems all that we got moms cooking in kitchen, screamin, shook and she bitchin' Goverment in minutes, switchin' from crook to defendant so mow its telephone harrasment and them lawyer bills and the glory feals fake, when the storys real fights with mother gittin' louder, and my sisters depression lost in system, so just listen cuz this is aggression late on payments for bills, medication and more no money for court, a knock, citation at door [HOOKx2] U.S. stealing from their children, brothers and daughters.... .......My mother and Father, damn cant take it no longer politicians dont beileve them, they just huggin' in public..... .......just a love loss of faith, in this strugglin' goverment [Course 2] adds in newspapers, evection notice in mail showin' us hell, dually noted, exposin us well I.R.S.'ll hunt you down, dued fight to the death its pressure up in court, fealing a slightness of breath lawyer office arguments, not thinking with reason extra talks with god, puttin' a price on beileving knowing it hurts, power off, phone doesnt werk so I hustled a lil' bit, but on the corner got jerked now my mom trippin' out, she dont know what to do its the system she doubtin', shes just lookin' for truth lost our very first home, now were selling possesions so we fell in this mess and now they tell me dont question try and surpress your agression, wit the tools they got with rules and laws, and control, with rules of thought the case they shoved it, our misery, they lovin' it so put ya finger up, and scream fuck the goverment [HOOKx2] U.S. stealing from their children, brothers and daughters.... .......My mother and Father, damn cant take it no longer politicians dont beileve them, they just huggin' in public..... .......just a love loss of faith, in this strugglin' goverment [Course 3] no home, no car, and no health insurance evil power struggles, wealths only deturrent broken heater buttons, so its cold in the winter knowin' i'm bitter, never cheat, i've chosen to shiver the schools liberal history, its teaching us wrong its just general misery, but they preaching it strong statesmen just easing it along, miss guided facts they lies in fact, that polititians supplied in past but thats our tax dollers for us, cant you see it The man, stands conceeded, but still cant beileve it then they repeat it, still we elect them to office not a large margin between the wins and the losses knowin' it costs us, I'm loosin' trust in my goverment Destroying our homes, and theres nothin' to cover it see my curiosity becomes, a deceitful sickness just legal victims, in this twisted little legal system [HOOKx2] U.S. stealing from their children, brothers and daughters.... .......My mother and Father, damn cant take it no longer politicians dont beileve them, they just huggin' in public..... .......just a love loss of faith, in this strugglin' goverment ~Babz~
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01-21-05, 11:01 PM | #2 | ||
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01-21-05, 11:12 PM | #3 | ||
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01-21-05, 11:17 PM | #4 | ||
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nice, flow was on point good topic kept me interested it a good sit back and think drop vocab was ight nice drop ...please return fav. "too fresh" on the open mic ..peace
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01-22-05, 02:17 AM | #5 | ||
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nice drop mayn.....flow was pretty decent here
good topic on what u picked on here, but overall the vocab was nice too...overall nice drop mayn...keep doing ya thing 8.9/10 rtf for me Freestyle Drill
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01-22-05, 02:36 AM | #6 | ||
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flow was decent
ya flow carried it nice perfect structure nice subject kept on pace and focused overall it was a nice depth drop need more like this could use a lil more multis and vocab tho 7/10
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01-22-05, 03:40 AM | #7 | |
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Flow!!!
this has one of the best flow's I have seen dropped for a while. Nice lyric's.stayed on topic. Its a good solid original peice.alot of truth behind this as well. good drop. |
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01-22-05, 07:59 AM | #8 | |||
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mayne it was hotness.....word-ociousness-dociousness brutha (<<<drunk talk.....hahaha).
for real though...i thought that you got down. do it like only a true crhymie can playboy.......... educate 'em all, lol. <<<really though.....(im serious). the topic was cool and your position on the current state of things was apparent. the lyrics were clean and precise.......the structure was on point.......the flow was nice and steady............and the vocabulary was somewhat extensive. good job crhymie. keep up the good work pimp. BOOST THE CRHYME RATE!!! one. s.v.
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01-22-05, 06:41 PM | #9 | |
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=172967
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01-22-05, 07:07 PM | #10 | ||
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yeah this had a real good flow to it..
lyrics were pretty good also especially if this was a audio drop..but still nice vocab was pretty good also.. overall nice drop man
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01-23-05, 12:10 AM | #11 | ||
~Lyrical Nirvana~
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ups.........................
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01-23-05, 02:36 PM | #12 | ||
~Lyrical Nirvana~
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ups and thanx for the feedback.....homie's
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01-24-05, 01:21 AM | #13 | ||
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made me think of shit 2 Pac would write.....i loved this.....nice flow.....nice vocab.....structure.....you got your point across.....i'd have to give it a 9/10.....
Them fucking idiots really think nothing of our troops dying for something they grew up loving fuck Bush and the government.....corrupt shit.....fuck the police man.....i loved that shit 9/10
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01-24-05, 03:46 AM | #14 | |
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this was a cool drop - your flow was decent - but your structure was good - you kind of lacked multies and vocab - but other than that - pretty cool drop - 7/10
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01-24-05, 03:47 AM | #15 | |
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Babylon - you did Government Love Loss - check out my sig and give me and c-bo feedback on our diss we did to Twizted Government
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