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09-12-05, 12:59 PM | #1 | |
Skadoosh!
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CriTiC vs. Drama Queen
IP:
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Check in by Wednesday Pieces due by Friday Voting closes by Sunday Topic: Wild At Heart * If you think that one of the pieces in this battle should go into the Pieces of Inspiration thread then please state which piece in your vote. * |
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09-12-05, 01:49 PM | #2 | ||
Odi et Amo
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IP:
Checkity Check Check
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09-13-05, 03:29 AM | #3 | ||
Black Poet
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IP:
Check Check,............ good luck ma
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09-14-05, 09:14 AM | #4 | ||
Odi et Amo
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IP:
Wild at Heart Secretly hidden in the silent mystery of the wood Soothing sound of nature remains misunderstood Not thinking outside the box, failing to grasp it all How it got me enthralled, the trees, the owl's call Thick canopy, a burning sun tries to peer through Never forget when the starry night made its debut Laying on clay, unstable ground without a sound Nothing but a pure, nature's breath can be found So the wonderful time now reflects in my present One with Mother Earth, not a feeling as pleasant Feed myself with essence of a forest, my home That splashing of fish making the wild river foam *branches cracking* *footsteps approach* I turn my head to locate an alien, distant factor A bird rapidly flees as danger would attract her I suddenly detect a vague familiar yet evil smell Seeking feet cause me to crawl in my safe shell They mumble words and scream out my name Can’t be found, everything needs to stay same! I search for a solution, break free from a cocoon Be away in my whole world, guided by the moon Rags torn apart by thorns, exposing a dark skin Lungs ready to explode yet they still closing in! Treacherous thorns cause sudden flow of blood And my feet get stuck in such disastrous mud For there is no more way to escape a final fate Yet I tried to hide but I couldn’t; now it’s too late My mind is racing about the situation I’m facing Unfortunately an end has come to the chasing “Look…over there…quick, grab her!” Here I am…captured and alone in this world Arrow in my flesh, making everything twirled And so I’m slowly losing track of any reality Cruelly confronted with a life’s brutal fatality I’ll be locked behind bars for everyone to see But I’ll remember stars shining onto that tree When I used to be free in wild, jungle abode Till the true nature of humans finally showed Although me and my beloved forest are apart In life, I shall always remain wild at the heart
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09-16-05, 08:28 AM | #5 | ||
Black Poet
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IP:
I'm really sorry but I ain't got time to drop, I'm gonna be mad busy this
whole month coz its year end and I work in accounts,... I going to drop out of the league until october, I will be much more active then but I need to work my lunch now sorry DQ.. |
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09-16-05, 09:45 AM | #6 | |
Skadoosh!
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IP:
Drama Queen wins by no-show.
This Battle Is Now Closed. |
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