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04-01-03, 07:27 PM | #1 | |
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!!!!!!!!!!!!lil verse-sum feed back pleaze!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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check dis out!
ma shit mo lethal den a loaded deuce clip// and ma flow iz so grimy it make pussy seem sick// i spit dez metaphores wit great precision// ma flow so nasty it make pussy seem delicious// God put me on da earth 2 cause destruction// ma brain iz lyke a chemistry experiment, mix sum metaphores and similes and theres an erruption// i sip hypno, hennesy, and bun mad trees// and lyrically i cure ma enemies of STD's// 2 many emcees have da Shit Talkers Disease// but its all good, cuz play will lowa dey self-esteem// lyrically im inclined 2 spit terrible descibles// ma shit iz lyke food poison it aint fuckin eatible// i spit dis shit wit nuff drastic tactics// slingin dez rhymez lyke dey fuckin elastics// ma flow iz nastier den pussy wit cancer// once da nines start poppin, i leave dez fools lookin lyke dancers// now imma end dis shit in a unique way// id lyke 2 close by sayin fuck yall and have a nice day// i bit da ending frum 8 mile only cuz i couldnt think of a good ending but besides dat i thought ma verse wuz iight, wat yall think? holla @ me! |
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04-02-03, 09:47 AM | #2 | |
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feed back u mutherfuckers...wake up!!!!!!!
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04-02-03, 08:34 PM | #3 | |
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zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.......shit yall wake up and give me sum feedback.....damn i mean show a nigga sum love!
where ma MP niggaz at!!!!!!! |
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04-04-03, 01:00 AM | #4 | |
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you straight the rhymes was straight the whole 8 mile thing wasnt coo but at least u wasnt tryin to act like that was yo shit
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04-04-03, 01:15 AM | #5 | ||
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GROOOOOOOOOOOOSSSSSSSSSSSSS, naw just playin, i know how it is, em and everybody else have taken all the good ryhmes, were left with scraps, were the lyrikal vultures, overall good rhymes, but dude, you contrtadicted urself 2 times, nine, duece, glock, gun talk in all is off dog, that went out with morris day and the times, but what can ya do, ill up it fo ya
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04-04-03, 01:56 AM | #6 | ||
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lol... pussy is delicious so dont try that... and the thug thing is over... otherwise it was cool
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04-04-03, 11:33 AM | #7 | |
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zeen nuff respect yall uppin 4 mo comments
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