rules:
10-20
no crew, dick ride or hate votes
no feeding

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

uhh.....lemme drop sumthing quick......

how you got me facing "G Unit" , another 50 fan, who's just samplin'/
talkin' bout brooklyn, ye rite, probably sum white dude from the hamptons/
I'll catch you on tha sidewalk, wit no dough, in your cheap clothes/
leave you seeing drive-by's like you were watching a Sean Paul video/
watching this man running from "heal to toe", cause' he saw Grimey with the pistol/
And don't worry dawg, i don't miss shots, that's why tha block call me "Van Exel"/
what's wrong? sticky keyboard cuz u wack off or yo' lines off wack/
throw your best punches, i swear, i be like jersey and throwback/
but i've should've known a pussy like you don't throw punches, u slap/
like yo dad, who's poppin, while you head is bobbin', in his fuckin lap/
6 ounces in yo throat like Kim', why?, all cuz of a few dollars'/
messin' wit Grimey? post all you want, I'll reject yo' shit like Ben Wallace/
I grasped tha crown from ya G, your weakness is your too damn gullable/
you might be I.L.L for awhile, but I will forever be ~$Untouchable$~/
So Judas, don't break bread with tha King dawg, that's probably the ultimate sin/
but unlike 50 i only have 3 questions, Who are you?, Why are you on R.B, and when is alldig gonna post my win?/

THIS SHOULD BE EASY, I'LL USE 10 LINES MR. EDIT....

Grimey still battles the skills-of-a-newbie, like chicks on the rag my lines leave him feeling-moody, all his lines more played then the reels-of-a-movie/
stop trying to force-complexity, I kill with no remorse-dont-mess-with-me, my lines leave you life recoursed-with-less-then-3 bars, youre gettin torched let this be a lesson-g/
I come precise with rhymes that instantly entice-respect, I always spit lyrics so sharp they slice-your-neck, im nice-with-text, bitch im twice-as-complex/
this kid gives "head cleaner" then when a VCR gets cleaned, ill crack this fiend n smash-this-teen with lines that ignite like gasoline/
my lyrical comprehension-more then you can grasp you fucking attention-whore, just so you can say you spit electric I hook your vocals to an extension-cord/

GRIMEY WUN Y ARE U QUOTING JOE BUDDEN IN YOUR SIG AND TRYING 2 MAKE IT LOOK LIKE U SED IT? AND Y HAV U GOT THAT PICTURE???

LOL@MR EDIT

i know itz joe budden, i just made it mine nigga, so why u hating bitch......faggot ass hoe.......2003 soldier, LOL man, tell your daddy to keep his dick in your throat til' you stop moving......

lol@mr edit also

damn killed him with 10 lines
i beleive g coulda came harder but with that 98.9% filler verse that grimey spit, i doubt if it was needed
uh..do i vote or is this just topical?

WOT U ON "WHITE PPL CANT RAP" U WANA BATTLE U TIGHT ASS TWAT.............................................. .................................................. ............................UR MUMS A DOG AND U GONA GET IT BIG TIME BY ME!! MC DANNY B.........................SHUT UP NIGGER..WHATS UP MY WIGGER..................HOLLA

watching this man running from "heal to toe", cause' he saw Grimey with the pistol/
And don't worry dawg, i don't miss shots, that's why tha block call me "Van Exel"/

6 ounces in yo throat like Kim', why?, all cuz of a few dollars'/
messin' wit Grimey? post all you want, I'll reject yo' shit like Ben Wallace/

leave you seeing drive-by's like you were watching a Sean Paul video/

So Judas, don't break bread with tha (lmaoKing dawg, that's probably(Err...Riiiiight) the ultimate sin/

Someone Is Having An Indentity Crisis.

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Ahahaha

damn, lol yall hate his ass or sumttin, shit is he really dat freakin hated or sumttin or does he suck dat much?

yo lets have some votes on this guys, I think it was a good battle can't vote cuz Brook is in mah crew, and we always be da ILLest
peace

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battle was aiight, but brooklyn took this, better word play, vocab, and punches...
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You didnt' Poll vote on my battle Brooklyn...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...81&pagenumber=2

Return Da' Fava..
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Both were good verses, but I was feelin Brook's verse more, came really hard for 10lines
good word play, flows and punches that hit harder. Grimey's verse was good too, no disrespect, But Brookly just came harder,.


Vote - Brooklyn

Brooklyn and Grimey both had weak methods and rhyme structures, no rhyme-scheme, no style-change, no intervals nothing, I give it to Brooklyn tho for multi's and methods. Grimey's lines had no balance.

Brooklyn's got skills now I kinda want to battle him
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i gotta say that brooklyn took this one, he rode it better wit harder hits.............................................. ................................................