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03-28-03, 10:58 AM | #1 | |
OriginIll
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~~No Ambitions~~
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Is this all life is? A continous daily regimine of absolutely NOTHING....
im not to ambitious, sleeping on hopes and wishes dreaming of fictious bitches & enormous riches this list cuts deep, slices that require stiches i miss much sleep, life is just nerves & twiches gone in the blink of an eye, lids open wide try to see what i missed, ignorance is my guide pissed, still can't figure out why im alive must have enless lives, inside i die all the time my life is a line & it ends at every sentence im not who im suppose to be, its pretend for the senses skin & expressions are just apolstery concealing the real me and all my guesses hard headed, forget it and dispose of all the lessons even though i know the answers before the questions what should i do? im accepting any suggestions i cant live this life any more, bored w/ routine headed nowhere fast and im picking up steam a one man banned, played out loud in this dream there's no I in team, and it seems im the outcast so sure of myself but real quick to doubt fast only Rich by name, i know nothing about cash no flash of the stash, just change for the bus i dont believe Myself, how the fuck can i Trust? headed for Dust To Dust, just to get swept away cant make sense of my life, yet i continue to pay how can tommorow be brighter when its always today?? CHECK OUT "TWO WAY NIGHTMARE" ME & MENTILL |
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03-28-03, 11:52 AM | #2 | ||
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I'm really felin' this... pretty deep shit.. flow was good all the way thru, vocab was pretty good.. yea yea, fo-real shit...
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03-28-03, 12:07 PM | #3 | |
OriginIll
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Appreciated... Peace
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03-28-03, 04:13 PM | #4 | |
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IP:
I liked this drop also..I like it better than the collab you got wit Mentill..but anyways..Nice Drop..Good flow..you maintained the flow all the way threw..Drop was pretty deep..Me and you outta do a collab sometime..i got a topic already
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03-31-03, 08:42 AM | #5 | |
OriginIll
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No Doubt.... Rtikulate we will get a Collab going soon... PEace
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03-31-03, 03:02 PM | #6 | |
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i know what ya saying bout the monotony of life. Im lookin for a job but every day is exactly the same i just float through doin nuttin but drinkin and smokin. Anyway the piece was nice nice flow aight vocab and good content. i cant really think of many criticisms bout the piece. 8/10 return the favour cuz and check mine shinobi life
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04-01-03, 11:14 AM | #7 | ||
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It had and excellent flow and use of multies.....
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^^^ nice ending |
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04-01-03, 11:57 AM | #8 | ||
Ya Mama's Favorite
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IP:
This was dope. I liked this right here and I'm feeling the concept alot cuz I feel like that sometime. Your flow was fundamental not really flashy which is good for getting across your point, if it were any longer it would have been easy to lose interest in the drop because of that. But thats the only thing, tight shit.
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04-01-03, 12:38 PM | #9 | |
OriginIll
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APPRECIATED .. THANKS
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04-01-03, 01:13 PM | #10 | |
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im not to ambitious, sleeping on hopes and wishes
dreaming of fictious bitches & enormous riches why do you dream of that? nice opener for this. this list cuts deep, slices that require stiches i miss much sleep, life is just nerves & twiches i dont know what the list is. nice rhyme pattern though. gone in the blink of an eye, lids open wide try to see what i missed, ignorance is my guide very nice. i like this one. pissed, still can't figure out why im alive must have enless lives, inside i die all the time brilliant. really fuckin nice! my life is a line & it ends at every sentence im not who im suppose to be, its pretend for the senses sort of fell off the level of those last 2 bars. skin & expressions are just apolstery concealing the real me and all my guesses falling off. hard headed, forget it and dispose of all the lessons even though i know the answers before the questions picking it up again. nice rhyme pattern. what should i do? im accepting any suggestions i cant live this life any more, bored w/ routine headed nowhere fast and im picking up steam a one man banned, played out loud in this dream yes you got it again. fucking nice! there's no I in team, and it seems im the outcast so sure of myself but real quick to doubt fast only Rich by name, i know nothing about cash ohh! i love this shit right here^ no flash of the stash, just change for the bus i dont believe Myself, how the fuck can i Trust? headed for Dust To Dust, just to get swept away cant make sense of my life, yet i continue to pay how can tommorow be brighter when its always today EXCELLENT ENDING! really nice! nice job Rich. This verse may have fell off a little bit but it kicked it self up like a son of a bitch. very nice. im hoping to see more stuff like this in the future. ps. peep . the disease . if you happen to have time. thanks man. very good. 9.7-10
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04-01-03, 01:38 PM | #11 | ||
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dope drop.
excellent topic.. and you breezed through it lovely. vocab was on point... some decent effective word-play here and there.... the multis were the highlight of this piece overall. dopeness. |
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04-01-03, 02:33 PM | #12 | |
OriginIll
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Appreciate G. Butters... and Sans as well... Peace
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04-01-03, 04:00 PM | #13 | |
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Nice Spit...
TS Like Topics And Flows That Are About Life And The MindState...Can't Knock The Hustle Cause Itz Real... |
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04-02-03, 07:58 AM | #14 | |
OriginIll
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Appreciated
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04-02-03, 08:09 AM | #15 | |
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I saw the topic.... liked it, so I read it
I loved it, I dare you to try to make somthin tighter, this was fresh It wasn't the BEST thang I saw on here, but it was real nice, REAL nice |
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