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02-20-06, 06:36 PM | #1 | ||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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NEW JOINT FROM TRIP!!!!!!!You Never Knew...PEEP IT!!!!!!!
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Ah'ight yall this here an a 4 verse song....its a story I cooked up few days again an I couldn't confine to 3 verses...I jus got the inspiration an I couldn't stop til I finished the thought...so peep it, lemme kno whats good wit it....1
Song Title: You Never Knew Completely written & performed by: Triple_N Link to song: http://www.soundclick.com/triplen Links to feed left: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2664786 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2664808 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2664840 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222311
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02-20-06, 06:41 PM | #2 | ||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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alright i'm listenin too this now
hmmm sampled beat....these are gettin old but the beat is still pretty hot.....you come off real hard...your quality seems 2000 times better...and your flow seems like it got better....this is pretty hot.....damn.....your change ups with your flow are pretty nice and your pressense is good.....your emotion is good in most parts i think you could have upped in it some....but overall this aint too bad of a track....hmmm overall this is about a 8/10 an other solid track keep um coming triple ~1 ---- can you return the favor on this? http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222351 feed used 2/20 "HOP ON In" Last edited by will appear : 02-21-06 at 02:09 PM. |
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02-20-06, 06:45 PM | #3 | ||
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Fiya..
like that beat....that chorus sample is perfect for this song... flow was great, lyrics great, delivery and emotion on point... and the past part about that shit is you got some meaning behind what you say cant say the rest for most theese cats 9/10
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02-20-06, 06:54 PM | #4 | ||
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Dope beat love the sample. Flow is fukin great lol! Presence is always dope with you! Delivery and emotion were on par! |
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02-20-06, 07:00 PM | #5 | ||
I see dumb people
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damn love this hook and beat.....
first verse was tight......... flow was there.....shit overall over there.... same with second verse........ shit is dope.... volume perfectly..... like beat stop in third verse and that get the fuck out shit....... like the story........ shit's dope man....... 4th verse same....... damn story in this is ill man..... overall, can't really say anything much about it, cuz i loved this yo, one of your best.... keep it up pc..... 9.5/10 feed used 2/20 "Kiss Your Ass Goodbye"
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02-20-06, 07:02 PM | #6 | ||
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Listenin, beat is hot....loving the flow, damn youre riding this beat real dope..and lyrics are amazin so far mayne...delivered perfect for this real shit..liking the story telling you told...reminds me of how u delivered dream but im feelin this faster flow...and emotion is quite subtle with the beat its ironic with the "it feels so good", which works really nice mayne...loving these stories makes me more interested...damn mayne downloading now.....loving the story...Presence is dope, love youre voice, has a street low down real shit feel to it and also u can tear them clubs up too...man this is a gr8 ass track...downloadind and listens again
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02-20-06, 07:12 PM | #7 | ||
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yo trip rtf mane...................................
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02-20-06, 07:38 PM | #8 | ||
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damn....!
ok this beat choice is very dope. your flow is so spectacular. kept everything together. your lyrics were very good and well this is the best track i've heard from you in awhile. literally I'ma be bumpin this for awhile now. the imagery of the lyrics is just so pure and I like where you went with it. your delivery is special on this one and I felt it really made me feel like you meant what you said. well every track you sound like that lol. but yea dope track. 1
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02-22-06, 06:18 PM | #9 | ||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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good looks on the feed yall!
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02-22-06, 07:47 PM | #10 | |
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listenin rite now,..
...your flow is good, im also lovin the beat....although i think your meatn for clubb trakks lol...but yea, nice story, the lyrics are nice...only thing i would change would be moer emotion...but yea this is definitely a hott track... rtf plz... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222977 Last edited by eastcoast : 02-22-06 at 08:11 PM. |
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02-22-06, 07:58 PM | #11 | ||
what dat be...
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like the beat it sounded good ,song was great i liked the background voice it went good with urs
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02-22-06, 08:02 PM | #12 | ||
L.E
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Listening...
Not feeling the beat much :\...like the drumline, that's about it... Liking your flow...it's nice and smooth. Lyrics are nice...Delivery fits this track nicely. Story is pretty good...Im diggin it. Good track man. You never dissapoint. Keep it up. Return the favor please and thank you. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222854 |
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02-23-06, 05:04 PM | #13 | ||
O.wning Y.ou D.aily
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Boo @ you for stealing my beat .....well, actually, I dropped a verse for a collab that never got done
Anywho.....you went in a different direction than we did. I'm liking what you did though. You got a good story telling vibe. I don't know if the delivery of this type of track was right though......you almost sounded happy about this chick's misfortune......evil bastard.....lol. You got a real original sound man. Keep this shit up, you can really do a lot. You already got everyone on RV all over your E-nuts ™
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02-23-06, 05:16 PM | #14 | ||
The Rulers Back
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Aight first off son beat is tight liken tha sample flow was on as always lyrics deep yo fa reel i felt you handled tha story well lotta cats tend to stray off reminded me off some nas shit kid mos def one of your best keep droppin =1=...
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02-25-06, 01:29 PM | #15 | ||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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AH'ight!!!!!!!!good looks yall
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