"Far From Here"

[Chorus x2]
In search...of a place far away
Where everything functions in another way
Given the chance to live out your dreams
The location remains unknown it seems
Although it resides, just don't know where
All that's known is that it's far from here

[Verse 1]
Everybody everywhere has problems and strife
Dreaming one day they'll fulfill their fantasy life
But that's hard to do in the world today
When struggle is a carnivore and we're its prey
Times are tough no matter where you are
Imagine eternal happiness and you've gone to far
Feels like bacteria eating its way through my skin
And it won't stop feeding until it makes its way in
Our whole existance is becoming a mess
And day by day these situations progress
Sometimes I don't want to step out of bed
So I go back to sleep and live in my dreams instead
It's repetitive...night and then day
And the message is clear like a plasma display
We were all put on earth for a meaningless purpose
First God creates...and then he destroys us

[Chorus x2]
In search...of a place far away
Where everything functions in another way
Given the chance to live out your dreams
The location remains unknown it seems
Although it resides, just don't know where
All that's known is that it's far from here

[Verse 2]
Life's an agonizing journey that'll take your breath
But in return it will give you death
That's not a fair exchange in my view
But when dealing with the universe what can you do?
It's a balancing act, right against wrong
People in between who don't know where they belong
Feels like even the sun is trying to assasinate me
When I walk out the door it highers its degree
And I know that things will only get worse
In fear of the day I'm drove to hell in a hearse
Damn...it's just too hard to grasp
I just lower my head, fall to my knees and gasp
I reach for the sky and beg for a miracle
God I served you, now it's the least you can do
My words are not answered let alone noticed
I must be invisible...I must not exist

[Chorus x2]
In search...of a place far away
Where everything functions in another way
Given the chance to live out your dreams
The location remains unknown it seems
Although it resides, just don't know where
All that's known is that it's far from here

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Anyone gonna hit this up...?

Nice Piece With Great Content. . Lacked Multi's, Could've Thrown Some In There To Spruse Up The Flow. . But The Flow Was On-Point, So It's All Good. . Vocab Was Good Enough. . I Don't Really Look For Vocab. . Main Thing With Me Is Flow And If It Flows, Then You're Straight. . Feeling This All Around Though Man. . Keep Droppin, Pz.

When struggle is a carnivore and we're its prey
^ ^ Dope.

- Give Some Feedback On My Drop. . . Doper Than Thou. . . Maybe A Decent Reply, Quote Something Lol, Something I'm Not Used To. . Good Look -

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Thanks for hittin' this up.

UPPIN!

i enjoyed it thought it was dope, people tend to not read the entire thing if its that long thats probably why not that many people have responded. But yeah i though it was dope. Return the favor i think tha shits called Bordem

Thanks for your oppinion. I'll try to hit your shit up later.

You never cease to amazy me MP~Phasiz...dope piece, nice flow, nice metaphors and some wordplay in that...very good...is that on the album? lol..."Peace"

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Otherwise known as Artikulate

Thanks.

And the answer is no...it isn't on the album.

Anyone else gonna hit this up?