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Lil Rip | 0 | 0% | |
SnypeR | 5 | 100.00% | |
Voters: 5. You may not vote on this poll |
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03-09-04, 05:37 PM | #1 | |
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SnypeR-vs-Lil Rip
IP:
8-15 bars
no bitin.............. no recylcing.............. verse due at 6:00 |
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03-09-04, 05:38 PM | #2 | |
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IP:
checkin in................................................ ...
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03-09-04, 05:41 PM | #3 | ||
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IP:
Rip Checking In.............................................you Drop First
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03-09-04, 05:59 PM | #4 | ||
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IP:
SHIT I'LL GO
RIP VERSE I'm going to slauter tray-six starting with you// then when i finish I'm coming for the crew// you see I'll run in your house and grab your mom by the hair// tell the rest of your family to get on the ground so TRAY-SIX beware// unpredictible but ill on this shit// I'm a one man army and aiming for your click// caue ou see i'm a body masucuter// a nigga quick to shoot you// dout make me grab my ruger// and straight take it to ya// so don't think that I'm some lite work// cause i'll get after you like child surport// that right a hard nigga talking that trash// put a bullet in you like miceal jackson in a little boy ass// on you uppin |
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03-09-04, 06:01 PM | #5 | |
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IP:
A quick one...................
YO.............. nigga when my glock-cocks it'll make you pop-lock/ like joe buddens i make you “drop-drop” get sizzled like pop-rocks/ like a daycare arsonist i burn kids/ when will you learn-kid, here take this beatin cus you earned-it/ ya rhymes remind of a SHERM-HEAD, you worthless faggot/ i'm murderin you son...this verse-is-tragic/ words-is-magic...you maggot you get murked-with-addlibs/ you trash-kid, call you afflack cus you duckin-me/ you faggot, you got a dick...you cant fuck-wit-me/ bitin my style...like nas you “wanna-be-me”/ fuckin cock suckin bitch...get the that cum out ya teeth/ |
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03-09-04, 06:08 PM | #6 | |
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IP:
Im breakin my verse down...
1.) Wordplay - Tray 6 2.) Rhyme Scheme's - Tray 6 3.) Switch-Ups -None 4.) Multies (Multy-Rhyming Syllabuls) - Rip 5.) Punches - Tray 6 6.) Personals - None 7.) Flow - Rip 8.) Punctuation - Tray 6 May seem like a bias vote but i enjoyed reading through this. Good battle but Tray just took it. Peace out
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The Sickest...
Killed - Lil'Rip, Popeye |
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03-09-04, 06:24 PM | #7 | |
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IP:
Thanx dawg, but u Forgot to poll vote^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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03-09-04, 06:27 PM | #8 | ||
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IP:
yall both did good but i think snypeR got this battle
punches good personal none that i saw wuz good structure wuz good my vote is snypeR
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i just mit murk u next |
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03-09-04, 06:33 PM | #9 | ||
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IP:
sniper most respect that shit was on point try to vote on some of my other battles
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03-09-04, 06:36 PM | #10 | |
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Lil Rip....Your verse lacked structured, and structure is a key concept in netcee battling, cause the reader wants to flow through your verse..........work on that, and the reast will follow............2.5/10
SnypeR......You mad nice...........your verse was straight to the point........and I like the way you put flow in that short verse...nice.......But I've 100 times better from you.............6/10 |
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03-09-04, 07:00 PM | #11 | |
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IP:
Thanx for the props rip............................
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03-09-04, 07:06 PM | #12 | ||
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IP:
hey i give props where props are due be honest i would vote for you to if i could
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03-09-04, 07:28 PM | #13 | ||
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IP:
Lil Rip ~ Toon was basically right, your rap looked more like a short essay or a long paragraph. Need to fix that for sure. Nothing to great really stood out to me, although the ending was good, MJ line. You ok man.
SnypeR ~ Liked your stuff, structure was obviously better, and multis were a lil played out at times but not bad. TO BOTH, it usually helps with personals if you can make plays on their name somehow. Just a sugesstion. Vote: SnypeR Plz hit this back up.. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116008
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well anyways.. RB's better. |
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03-09-04, 07:41 PM | #14 | ||
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IP:
lil rip is wack as hell he cant spit to save his life
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03-09-04, 08:37 PM | #15 | |
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IP:
thanx for the love ya'll.............^^^were ya sig Lift?
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