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05-30-07, 09:00 PM | #1 | ||
I'm Talented.Period.
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"Aggression"...OMG!!!!...omg!!...Q mothafuckas!!!
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^Click on "Aggression" Beat: Swifty Productions Hook: Q Verses: 1-3 All Q Concept: Pure emotion and rage.PERIOD. Holla 1 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242521 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242323 |
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05-30-07, 09:02 PM | #2 | ||
Light Weight
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yea nice dark beat man.. me personally love the dark beats...
verses is nice verse 3 the best to me.. all have the nice Q flow.. liken the concept for this beat fits it nice.. Hook yea its pretty catchy.. i can Def see this on a Cd being a hit man good shit quality is nice too man gettin better wit it 9/10 no joke |
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05-30-07, 10:20 PM | #3 | ||
I'm Talented.Period.
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Thanks for the feed
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05-30-07, 10:51 PM | #4 | |
My Dick Stay Wet
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yo i'm lovin dis track, i actually think ima put it on my ipod and bump dat shit....it had my head rockin n shit...da hook was good, simple but catchy, i can definately see that being a hit like Jay said....9.939572948792823/10
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05-30-07, 11:59 PM | #5 | ||
I'm Talented.Period.
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^^Dang nigga...I can't get a perfect 10?
lol preciate da feed 1 |
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05-31-07, 10:06 AM | #6 | |
Middle Weight
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we were both mad yesterday man
but only one of us captured the emotion on a beat, and it paid off for you your flows nice and tight on here, as usual.. hooks ill... cool track q dizzle.
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05-31-07, 11:05 AM | #7 | |
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your beat choice seems to get weirder and weirder on some repetative shit the flow is solid but ide actually have to listen to ya lyrics to see if they making sense but they sound aight the hook was mad short coulda used something not sure what but seemed lacking overall decent i just dont think this music lately is on the level of some of ya other shit ...
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05-31-07, 12:52 PM | #8 | |||
I'm Talented.Period.
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You're right...I'm not on the same level...I'm on a different level...It's called evolution brotha People who haven't heard me before have a different reaction because they aren't comparing it to my earlier work... It's all good though man...like 286 said, I accomplished my goal of evoking aggression on track. Preciate da feed yall... 1 |
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05-31-07, 05:09 PM | #9 | ||
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sure thing but to evolve with no purpose is not really evolution is it?
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05-31-07, 06:09 PM | #10 | |||
I'm Talented.Period.
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How would you know what my purpose is? I'm quite happy with my current path in rap. Thank you. |
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05-31-07, 12:19 PM | #11 | |
I don't lose
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nice use of assonance in the first verse....track does good for emotion....hook should be layerd more....needs more warmth.....2nd verse works....nothing outstanding...but it works...3rd is a bit better then the 2nd.....
i have to balance in the middle of the other people n tony - this one was good not out the park, but with how good you have been i can see parts where this coulda been better.... good shit tho....great entrapment of an emotion....
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06-04-07, 09:44 PM | #12 | |
Herb
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yea hes happy wit his path in rap..most people like him are happy goin down......1
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