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03-04-03, 12:06 PM
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<--Fragile from a fuck-->
IP:
Comin' up on a reality thing,
that she actually seemed like she happen for me/ in the past in breeded some immacualte dreams then said I lacked to see what she was askin' from me/ hearts made to be broken, highs must some down gotta get used to her eyes of lust not around/ But it's cool, to young and sexy not to find a replacement but a foolish form of jugdement got me tied and pacein'../ the floor, cuz the aura had me thinking that more than four months I would adore so I scored in with the raw/ just that one time I ain't have no condom, no problem I'll just pull out quick as a gat to spray a whole squadron/ ..now things ain't work out, and I'm thinking the worst now the thrill here done fizzled but I'm worried about a birth now/ I'm I thinking to much in my head now..just dream stuff or a statistic of wedlock..it seems this month/ is going so slow, i'm foamin' to know I'm i blessed with a preciaous soul, and one that just werck my own?/.... now Im on some fuck a bitch shit, but when I literaly did it I get stuck with this shit/ Now I hope she never calls confessin' up not cuz my life with her is over, but for one that just begun/ |
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03-04-03, 12:30 PM
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damn pretty ill of a drop but i counldnt picture my-self goin in a bitch raw
dope drop keep em comin ya flow wasnt the best but the contene of the peice made up for it |
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03-04-03, 02:19 PM
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you what's the word for this... umm... profound, hell yeah... damm dawg, got guts posting shit like this from your personal life, personally I probably wouldn't do it... maybe... I dunnoh...
Yo, this one's pretty short, but you get your point across pretty well, like this guy said^ your flow wasn't the best, but the rhymes were nice for this topic, not too simple, not too complex... Keep spitting man... -1- |
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03-05-03, 11:45 AM
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IP:
thanks so far for the replys, the rest of ya'll let me know whattup. I wrote this while Freeway's "What we do" song was playing and the beat kinda got stuck in my head and if any of you know that song it kinda requires a unorthadox kinda on-beat off- beat flow so it came out in type like that.
Uppin this |
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03-06-03, 01:20 PM
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IP:
^^ up
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03-06-03, 02:44 PM
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man u had a good flow on hea,@ least u knew wut u wuz talkin bout.Soundz like a crazy situation..props to ya.Stay^
-Avi |
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03-07-03, 11:59 AM
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Yhea, thanks Av ^^^
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03-08-03, 02:11 PM
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^^^ Damn ya'll holla, good or bad
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03-09-03, 06:42 PM
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Last up hittin wit some new shit soon^^^^
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