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Old 01-21-07, 11:42 AM   #1
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23. Eye Que (1-0) vs. 24. Aeral (0-0)

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Old 01-21-07, 12:15 PM   #2
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Whoever drops first, just match..

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Old 01-22-07, 01:35 AM   #3
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Old 01-22-07, 05:37 AM   #4
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eye - que

Dude i been sick since forever, and you ain't even been around for a while,
the last time a-ccuse' gotten big... it was the year of OJ Simpsons trial.
no room for denial, bitch, my style's lit. you lay low on your rhyme grind,
Cos the only time IQ's ever been to the top was in the mind of Albert Einstein
Don't test me you faggot, becasue you're abusing the walls,
how can he not be gay... Cue's always swimming in a POOL full of Balls.
Bitch i'm putting all bets aside its to the point where its past straddle,
and they say an eye for an eye... but that'd prove out to be a wackk battle.
I'm not really trying and im rusty as fuck, but dude you're so bad,
that i'm always on top of your reply like the mental funk ad.
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Old 01-22-07, 10:34 AM   #5
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Alright, I'm matching with (5 Bars)

This dude is used to loses, notice Que carries the crown
So how can Aeral be up?..when he is System of A Down
Dude hard? Come on, you named after a mermaid so fade out
Would think Aeral was a center fold, way he getting laid out
A lot of tough talk, played punches and wack concepts
Yea that explains ya verse..
But whats your excuse for your lack of prospect
I break necks, and shatter dreams of fags like you
Compare this cat to a pencil..
The way he always coming in number two
Number 1? You're looking at him, with style so complex
I could say your fitting in..
But I'd be lieing the way your lines are out-stretched
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Old 01-22-07, 11:13 AM   #6
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ok, thanks for dropping early man.


lets get some votes.
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Old 01-22-07, 11:59 AM   #7
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no room for denial, bitch, my style's lit. you lay low on your rhyme grind,
Cos the only time IQ's ever been to the top was in the mind of Albert Einstein
Don't test me you faggot, becasue you're abusing the walls,
how can he not be gay... Cue's always swimming in a POOL full of Balls.


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Dude hard? Come on, you named after a mermaid so fade out
Would think Aeral was a center fold, way he getting laid out


The ring rust is still showing, and you are still dropping played concepts Que. Try looking at some past LBL battles to see what has been done. Or if you get a concept, try using the search on the site to see if it has been done. Moving on, I quoted that center fold because I thought the punchline was nice enough but could've been better. However, I do believe The Little Mermaid was Ariel and not Aeral. That also kind of throws off the System of a Down punch with the song Aerials because that and Aeral are not the same. Aeral didn't come too good, he had enough to win and the Albert Einstein nameplay bar was pretty tight. And I know the other bar I quoted was a gay bar.... but DAMN... it made me laugh nonetheless.

Anyway, Eye-Que.. your still getting back into your swagger and you'll start winning consistently I think soon enough. But, try not to be so played dude.

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Old 01-22-07, 01:50 PM   #8
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Feel you, I didn't really work on mine, just dropped real quick dismorning..
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Old 01-22-07, 09:12 PM   #9
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aeral:
no room for denial, bitch, my style's lit. you lay low on your rhyme grind,
Cos the only time IQ's ever been to the top was in the mind of Albert Einstein
Don't test me you faggot, becasue you're abusing the walls,
how can he not be gay... Cue's always swimming in a POOL full of Balls.

not that great, but not bad, some funny nameplays.. pretty consistant.. the ad line almost made the quotables

eye que:
This dude is used to loses, notice Que carries the crown
So how can Aeral be up?..when he is System of A Down

this barely made the quotables.. you didn't come with strong punches and you came more played than Aeral did

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Old 01-22-07, 09:33 PM   #10
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no room for denial, bitch, my style's lit. you lay low on your rhyme grind,
Cos the only time IQ's ever been to the top was in the mind of Albert Einstein
Don't test me you faggot, becasue you're abusing the walls,
how can he not be gay... Cue's always swimming in a POOL full of Balls.

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Dude hard? Come on, you named after a mermaid so fade out
Would think Aeral was a center fold, way he getting laid out

In my eyes, Aeral had a couple more quotables than the Eye. Eye came too simple compared to Aeral's verse. It seemed like Aeral wanted to win more than Eye did. I got him taking this this one.

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Old 01-24-07, 06:47 AM   #11
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yo trus my bad but i cant vote this week, im leaving outta town today for a week and i wont have access, i'll double up next week or something.. p'z
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Old 01-24-07, 08:27 AM   #12
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Don't test me you faggot, becasue you're abusing the walls,
how can he not be gay... Cue's always swimming in a POOL full of Balls.
Bitch i'm putting all bets aside its to the point where its past straddle,
and they say an eye for an eye... but that'd prove out to be a wackk battle.

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Dude hard? Come on, you named after a mermaid so fade out
Would think Aeral was a center fold, way he getting laid out

Aeral just came like he wanted to win, Eye Que you had one good line but it still didn't hit very hard, you should've re-worded it.

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Old 01-24-07, 12:04 PM   #13
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Don't test me you faggot, becasue you're abusing the walls,
how can he not be gay... Cue's always swimming in a POOL full of Balls.
Bitch i'm putting all bets aside its to the point where its past straddle,
and they say an eye for an eye... but that'd prove out to be a wackk battle.

vs.

Dude hard? Come on, you named after a mermaid so fade out
Would think Aeral was a center fold, way he getting laid out

One sided battle honestly. Eye-Que came with alot of played shit. And Aeral was a bit creative.

V/Aeral
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Old 01-26-07, 10:22 AM   #14
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Don't test me you faggot, becasue you're abusing the walls,
how can he not be gay... Cue's always swimming in a POOL full of Balls.
Bitch i'm putting all bets aside its to the point where its past straddle,
and they say an eye for an eye... but that'd prove out to be a wackk battle.

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Dude hard? Come on, you named after a mermaid so fade out
Would think Aeral was a center fold, way he getting laid out

aeral came good enough to win,. i think eye que understands hes still a bit rusty and just needs to read up on current LBL battles to get back into the mix of things so ill save the preaching
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Old 01-26-07, 12:07 PM   #15
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This has enough votes.

Dudes, go vote on something else.
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