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check that track out... its unfinished .... but its like 80% done so juss gimme some feedback on it..
my link is in my sig... |
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its pretty good
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thanx
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no no no no no no no no onoononono
I can tell your new, take your time, memorize before you spit, and put some kind of flare in your voice, wayyyy offff beat |
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well i am new to audio... i was off beat...?
i thought i had my flow on that one.... damn... thanx for the feedback... |
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up up
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Got More Meds Than Pfizer
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yo, your voice isn't right, it sounds like your reading, you're off beat for a good portion of time... take mr.legends advice and memorize... but yo, what part-a TO ya from dawg... link me back... 1
hit up my isht... http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=64316
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i live in richmond hill... right beside silver city the movie theatre...
thanx for feed |
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DawG,
this was....ummm...sad i want to get the point accross to you with out like, being unconstructive.... ur flow...is scaring me...that is not flow....its like a white water rapids with a lot of water falls...its simple...and pointless....like most of rap quality definatly could be upped....that aint my department.... DawG start there.....keep ya head up, im not tryin to be negative.... |
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so how do i improve on my flow ?
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up up
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rhyme more words in sentences ..... and fa real peep ppl with nice flows like jay-z and shit....just make it sound nice i dunno...focus on written more and ya flow will just come to u...just keep droppin cuz practise makes perfect ya know...by the way kid do u know how ta dance???
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yeah... why ...?
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up
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