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02-08-04, 09:24 PM | #1 | ||
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Check it, P.I.C.'s first track,
Young but wise, but ready for the challenge.....please comment on this first track http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/fucksoeur3music.htm those are the lyrics.....enjoy what can i do You blow your shit on me coz you know I got the way The flow to match the beat I got from doctor DRE You can’t repose coz your nighmares won’t be okay You won’t awaken and percieve the dawn of day IT’s like saying in a black bar, I’m from the KKK They responded with hate, a gun to your head, no time to pray Got on your knees, glued your hands, looked at the sky so gray Asked to god fo this to go away Expect me not to diss and everthing to be okay You pissed me off, now it’s time fo me to portray The real image behind the great mask of hate Drop my bombs fo you to hit the massive grave Blow you up like Sadam’s statue made of clay Memories of me like the one of BAGDAD here to stay Gonna settle up my regime and you better obey Or execution with lead in your cranium shall the bullet lay White bandana with a celtic cap backwards Rewind me back coz I’m going more towards The sky, so high, I lie, I try this one way fame, is enough to make you die that’s when all enemies collide What can I do To kill your troop To Tell the motherfuckin truth If you talk the talk you gotta walk the walk Now lock your locks and watch the clock While I top the block, 180 second clock Is that enough for me, to clutch the shot You think that hiphop is only about wearing a jersey To drink smirnov talkin about your hommy in jersey being in this rap game, you don’t know what you got into Friends backstabbing you, got no clue who’s with you Trust and biblical faith is not somethin to play with One day you make a handshake, next day greeted with a fist Jealousy is what you take, then my ass you can kiss Cuz from this day on, I’m livin to do this The gladiator Maximus, the roman general that commands all my lines Send soldiers to bring you down from crimson skies next time my next rimes might be about you |
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02-08-04, 09:35 PM | #2 | |
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i dont know the rules here..but you usualy have to make a few replies before you post..the same rule applies..because most rappers wont reply to your shit if you dont reply to theirs..get it?..
also..if there is a reply minimum..they will close your thread..for not making replies before you post..and then you wont be able to get any replies to your shit.. just some advice.. pZ..
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02-09-04, 09:32 PM | #3 | |||
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Ok thanks men but how about my shit is it good |
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02-08-04, 11:26 PM | #4 | |
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IP:
umm....huh??? ok, first, are you canadian or somethin cuz your words were all slurred soundin, second whats with the tryin to use a deep voice for the end of the chorus there....and third, your flow was very poorly put together and didnt even go to the beat.......
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02-09-04, 03:45 AM | #5 | ||
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lmao...... ur voice is funny as fuck and ur off alot main .. turns track off
keep elevatin though
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02-10-04, 01:06 AM | #6 | ||
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IP:
it seems like this is your first song, just keep on making music untill you find that song that your like daaaamn this is dope. you will get there just enjoy your emotions and your mic..........have fun with it.....good for first track, your voice sounds like you would battle alot.........
peace
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02-10-04, 01:08 AM | #7 | ||
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thxs for the support men....really helps mentaly, I gave a lot of time and effort to get this shit right thxs
peace |
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02-12-04, 09:06 AM | #8 | ||
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IP:
for your first track it's pretty nice... u got nice emotion... you're off beat a little.. lol.. only 'bout wearin' a jersey.. but u said white bandana.. so is that what hip-hops all about... i dno, it was good 4 a first time..
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02-12-04, 03:41 PM | #9 | |
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Voice Is Fuckin' Funny As Shit .... Flow Was Horrible .... Delivery/Presence Was Not There At All ... U Were Stretchin' Ya Words Madly ... Lyrics Were Whack To Me ... Ya Multies Were Ehh Decent At Times .... But U Were Inconsistent Thru Out The Track ...
Not Feelin' This At All .... -Nuff Said .... ~ Uno ~ |
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02-13-04, 10:55 AM | #10 | |
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IP:
replyin the favour,
ya voice is nice, but ya flow was kinda ehhhhhh. you seem like ya missin 1 or 2 syallables in every bar, and ya kinda stretch ya words. nice quality, good emotion, juss work on ya flow, that was ya main flaw. |
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02-15-04, 09:55 PM | #11 | ||
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ok thxs men
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