Just some 16 bar shit I did right here on the keys while I was online, I ain't droped no open mic in a long ass time
whole lotta methoric stuff in there so you gotta read between the lines.....So I'mma spit like this......

It’s an illusion to dark clouds when smoking purple haze in the air
Drown in my sorrows and bathe in despair/….ya’ll don’t know
Of a synonym to 'give up', I craft my 'gift with elevation'
This games rift of escalation is its myth of lebatation/
But who I’m I to disagree, cuz I dissed agree...
Now me and agree got beef cause kissin’ ass I disbelieve/..a black sheep
I hate backpackers, not fond of the jiggyness
I make raps rappin’ to the pond of tough drippyness/
Livin’ the code of the streets, it’s hard to hack the system
That got’s me mix to abruptly talk and ask to listen/
I got passed the wisdom, from the generation before me
..Yhea the sour deeds caused by crack fazes they snort deep/
So now who’s to guide me, drive me to think positive
When the option is an octave of inactive light that surround the kid?/
And don’t tell me shit about I’m bad for the community
..shit from the looks of this it was bad before I was a movin' seed/
So how can a nigga break the cycle? The pains recycled
Where’s J Fox when I need a time machine to save my life full/

Scream at cha Dirty

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this gets 9 IQ points

this was a nice piece dawg......liked the flow and idea.....sicc shit playa....stay up.......

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^^AIight thanks playa, good peepin' out. Rest of all speack ya peace

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Bang On The Table Productions

For Once in ur Life , Will you Give Some1 Decent Feedback , Anyways this piece was Tight , Ur flow was Onpoint , It Lacked Kinda Lacked Vocab , But it was still Sickkk , U had Nice Wordplay , And All , Overall U Get a 8/10............ Keep Spitting

lol, bash... I agree yo, this was a'ight... not the best but I didn't expect it to be really.... you're gettin' better still.. 1

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AIight then, good peepin' out, rest of ya'll get at me. I'm 'bout to be out

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I also agree with bash. This was pretty tight. Parts could use some work but overall it was tight. Keep up the good work

i like this piece yo it was tight, keep up the good work

AIight then thanks, I'll be sure to check ya'll shit out too.

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AIight one more time for a bounce to somethin' eles on here. State ya'll piece and I'll get back

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Bang On The Table Productions

yo that was raw.......propz

feelin that dawg, liked it, on point n ad gud flow, tight shit dawg, 4real!!!!!!