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08-23-07, 09:28 AM | #1 | ||
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beat'cho feet
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beat,production,written and performed by ME!!!!!!!
beating feet is a dance we do to go-go music in DC. but i also use it in a storytelling metaphor. check it, http://www.freewebs.com/nex2kin/guestbook.htm feedback, links, http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=243785 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=243216
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and youngins say that i should dumb down my wordplay/ y'all ball, i just sign lines and let the words play/ DRAMA GANG established 2005 MY MUSIC. CONSTANTLY UPDATED!!!! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=527460 |
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08-23-07, 04:05 PM | #2 | |
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beats-okay
production need plenty of work production is horrible - the hook is meh has a boring type flow. i dont like it that much....sorry.....up ya production skills so its managable....n punch in everynow n then i can tell when your strugglin for breath....' the ohhs didnt sound convincing....its like you didnt put your all into it....and it came out half assed....and made u sound assed out.....work on this one, you can fine tune it into a hit maybe
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09-17-07, 04:49 PM | #3 | ||
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I thought it was pretty dope still...The Flow had me more into the track than the production...but then again my production knowledge is limited...so i can't really give u feed on that...but stay up.
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09-18-07, 02:56 PM | #4 | ||||
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u diddnt "produce" shit.....thats just a looped sample thats been used b4...i think its from a mobb song..not 100% but i know i heard it b4....
quality is bad...rhymes n what not an't bad....flows not bad, but how u sampled the beat fucked it up
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09-19-07, 10:15 AM | #5 | ||
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^ oh yeah i changed the song to a freeverse on banks' cake beat. so thats why people sayin' that i stole the beat. i forgot that i even changed the song. as y'all notice, this thread is kinda old. its from when i had that song on here.
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and youngins say that i should dumb down my wordplay/ y'all ball, i just sign lines and let the words play/ DRAMA GANG established 2005 MY MUSIC. CONSTANTLY UPDATED!!!! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=527460 |
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09-25-07, 10:38 AM | #6 | ||
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^- Yeah yo i cant even find that shit But yo son your hair is crazy on your soundclick, some sideshow bob shit
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09-25-07, 03:00 PM | #7 | ||
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oh yeah that pic is like from when i was 9. i'm 17 now. so my hair is waaaay long now.
oheyah and its easy to make instrumentals that'chu cant find. just get the normal song and loop off where the vocals aren't and there it is. i use my own beat for my albums but my mixtapes are all loops from other people's beats. thats where most of these beats on mixtapes come from anyway.
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and youngins say that i should dumb down my wordplay/ y'all ball, i just sign lines and let the words play/ DRAMA GANG established 2005 MY MUSIC. CONSTANTLY UPDATED!!!! http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=527460 |
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