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lm 5 71.43%
.:FiorZ:. 2 28.57%
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Old 01-25-04, 09:35 AM   #1
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(Instant)lm Vs .:FiorZ:.(Voice of tha streetz)

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Ok Instant Vs Voice of tha streetz

10 lines,
both spit within 1 hour of checking in,
No d/r,
No crew,
No hate,
No feeding
No freepsoting,

………………..good luck to all……..pz
 
Old 01-25-04, 09:42 AM   #2
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Checkin in....I'll drop ASAP....................
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Old 01-25-04, 10:09 AM   #3
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Ok here I am....

Your bout as much use as a book wid no nouns or verbs
Thinkin your dope and good, leadin a wack crew of herbs
I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear
Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career
Show no fear, battle me, let me abuse your hidden record
Coz I've read your battles, but I fell asleep coz I got bored
Your crew gettin whored, your fallin, into sinkin sand
Coz we all know, that your the wackest rapper in england
I stand tall over you, I write accapella, dont need no beats
And your wack, wont ever hear your voice on tha streetz...


And now I'm done....
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Old 02-08-04, 10:40 AM   #4
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Quote:
Originally Posted by LM
Ok here I am....

Your bout as much use as a book wid no nouns or verbs
Thinkin your dope and good, leadin a wack crew of herbs
didn't like this 1st line esp.
I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear
Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career
hardest line of the verse
Show no fear, battle me, let me abuse your hidden record
Coz I've read your battles, but I fell asleep coz I got bored
well... it rhymed
Your crew gettin whored, your fallin, into sinkin sand
Coz we all know, that your the wackest rapper in england
Good job rhyming with England, not a great set up tho
I stand tall over you, I write accapella, dont need no beats
And your wack, wont ever hear your voice on tha streetz...
blah.. not a great closer at all



Quote:
Originally Posted by Fiorz
Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk
Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk"
I don't see the pic under the browser so I don't get it, but it doesn't sound good
If Ma Whole Crew Was Blind, Then Ya Punches Still Missed 'Em
Cos My Spit's Leave Your "Crew" Crushed Up In An "Instant"
Alright I guess, a lil played
Claimin' Ma Crew Is Weak, That Shits False Like Perjury
Plus Your Whole Crew Roster Is Faker Than Plastic Surgery
I think this was okay, using extended vocabulary
Packin' More Heat Than A Shotgun thats Jus' Killed .:K:.
Oh No, Your Crew's Doomed Now, Hold On, It Was Anyway
The set-up was weak, but I liked the finishing line
Askin' Us To Battle, We Battlin' To Get Our Voice On Tha Streetz
Cos Like Vegetarian Burgers, You Just Aint Worth Tha Beef
how r veggie burgers not worth beef, they don't have beef, but I'm sure they can afford it, played concept n e wayz


Alright so my vote goes to Fiorz, not a great battle guys, I know you can do better, I voted on y'alls batle so please vote on my battle.
 
Old 01-26-04, 01:48 PM   #5
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signin' in................................................ ......................
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Old 01-26-04, 02:00 PM   #6
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Quik Key...

Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk
Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk"
If Ma Whole Crew Was Blind, Then Ya Punches Still Missed 'Em
Cos My Spit's Leave Your "Crew" Crushed Up In An "Instant"
Claimin' Ma Crew Is Weak, That Shits False Like Perjury
Plus Your Whole Crew Roster Is Faker Than Plastic Surgery
Packin' More Heat Than A Shotgun thats Jus' Killed .:K:.
Oh No, Your Crew's Doomed Now, Hold On, It Was Anyway
Askin' Us To Battle, We Battlin' To Get Our Voice On Tha Streetz
Cos Like Vegetarian Burgers, You Just Aint Worth Tha Beef

Peace..................Lets Get These Votes Goin'
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Old 01-27-04, 06:40 AM   #7
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where da fuk are the votes..............lol

uppin uppin
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Old 01-27-04, 12:50 PM   #8
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Uppin for my squad member....................................
 
Old 01-28-04, 11:54 AM   #9
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uppin yet agen.............................................. ..............
lets get sum votes up in this mu'fuka
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Old 01-28-04, 04:40 PM   #10
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This one's tough...

LM came with (and I checked twice) no wordplay at all...

Everything was straight forward, not even a single meta.

That's not cool and not what I'm used to seeing by you.

Now...

Fiorz did come with wordplay and metas...
Mixed things up nicely.

But...

All, and I mean all his shit was either played to death (veggie burgers/beef, plastic surgery)...

Or whack (monk) (playin on ya own sig)...

So...

How to vote?

I guess LM for the originality.
And for showing more aggression.

This battle was hard as fuck to decide...
And not for good reasons!

Don't half-ass!

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Old 01-31-04, 08:53 AM   #11
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^................................................. .................................................. ..............pz
 
Old 02-02-04, 06:15 AM   #12
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Uppin for votes (1)................................
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Old 02-02-04, 08:38 AM   #13
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alright battle......both came sub par and shit.....

Your bout as much use as a book wid no nouns or verbs
Thinkin your dope and good, leadin a wack crew of herbs
original. ..7/10
I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear
Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career
ehh.... played 5/10
Show no fear, battle me, let me abuse your hidden record
Coz I've read your battles, but I fell asleep coz I got bored
want feelin it 5/10
Your crew gettin whored, your fallin, into sinkin sand
Coz we all know, that your the wackest rapper in england
getting better...nice personal 8/10
I stand tall over you, I write accapella, dont need no beats
And your wack, wont ever hear your voice on tha streetz
again a good personal ... 810
31 poitns
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Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk
Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk"
No...monk?..blah 5/10
If Ma Whole Crew Was Blind, Then Ya Punches Still Missed 'Em
Cos My Spit's Leave Your "Crew" Crushed Up In An "Instant"
decent 7/10
Claimin' Ma Crew Is Weak, That Shits False Like Perjury
Plus Your Whole Crew Roster Is Faker Than Plastic Surgery
better .... 7/10 nice puersonal punch
Packin' More Heat Than A Shotgun thats Jus' Killed .:K:.
Oh No, Your Crew's Doomed Now, Hold On, It Was Anyway
much better 8/10 , witty
Askin' Us To Battle, We Battlin' To Get Our Voice On Tha Streetz
Cos Like Vegetarian Burgers, You Just Aint Worth Tha Beef
ehh....3/10 wasnt feeln it.....
30 points...........you lose....by a piont

decent .... but both came weak .... vote - LM.....more originality.....more wit.....better punches......Fiorz i hated your closer !......
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Old 02-02-04, 09:35 AM   #14
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Your bout as much use as a book wid no nouns or verbs
Thinkin your dope and good, leadin a wack crew of herbs
5/10.. cant get more average than that line when it comes to battles
I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear
Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career
7/10.. significantly better.. 2nd line watered down by first tho
Show no fear, battle me, let me abuse your hidden record
Coz I've read your battles, but I fell asleep coz I got bored
4/10.. simple yes.. but in no way effective.. played
Your crew gettin whored, your fallin, into sinkin sand
Coz we all know, that your the wackest rapper in england
5/10.. another below par punch.. nothin new with regards concept
I stand tall over you, I write accapella, dont need no beats
And your wack, wont ever hear your voice on tha streetz...
7/10.. compared to the rest not a bad way to finish

28/50

Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk
Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk"
6/10.. liked the first line.. nice concept.. ?? @ the second
If Ma Whole Crew Was Blind, Then Ya Punches Still Missed 'Em
Cos My Spit's Leave Your "Crew" Crushed Up In An "Instant"
5/10.. massively overplayed meta4s
Claimin' Ma Crew Is Weak, That Shits False Like Perjury
Plus Your Whole Crew Roster Is Faker Than Plastic Surgery
6/10.. not hard hittin at all.. but original
Packin' More Heat Than A Shotgun thats Jus' Killed .:K:.
Oh No, Your Crew's Doomed Now, Hold On, It Was Anyway
4/10.. horrible.. need i say more?
Askin' Us To Battle, We Battlin' To Get Our Voice On Tha Streetz
Cos Like Vegetarian Burgers, You Just Aint Worth Tha Beef
7/10.. relatively nice closer.. original(ish) meta4

28/50

Lmao! Scores are tied.. cant go by closer.. so i'll go on my fave punch:

"I'll punch you to the kerb, kick your brain cells into gear
Been here almost a year, and still not started a rb career"
- LM

Let down by the first line.. cos the second wasnt bad at all.

"Dischargin' Flows Like A Monsoon, To Leave This Crew Sunk
Bitch, You Think You Tough??...Man, You "Softer" Than A "Monk"
- Fiorz

Opposite to LM.. nice first line but dodgy second.. tho it was still a tad stronger than LM's..

VoTe = Fiorz

Drop a vote on whichever one u can:

vs wogzta:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111096

vs W1CKED:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111341

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Old 02-04-04, 05:40 AM   #15
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Uppin for votes (2)............................
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