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11-12-03, 08:26 AM | #1 | |
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drugs...
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DRUGS...MEANT TO MAKE YOU FEEL GOOD
DRUGS...THEY CAN BE FOUND IN ANY HOOD DRUGS...YOU CAN GET YOUR MONEYS WORTH DRUGS...IS AFFECTED IN SOME CHILDRENS BIRTH DRUGS...CAN LEAD YOU INTO ADDICTION DRUGS...CAN MAKE YOU START SLIPPIN DRUGS...CAN MAKE YOU LOSE FRIENDS DRUGS...CAN BE FOUND IN DA WHOLE HIP-HOP TREND DRUGS...TO MOST PEOPLE IT SEEMS COOL TO DO DRUGS...CAN MAKE YOUR FAMILY DISOWN YOU DRUGS...HAS RUINED SOME PEOPLES LIVES FOR YEARS DRUGS...IS POWERFUL WHEN YOU MIX IT BEERS I'VE LOST MY EDUCATION OVA DRUGS... I'VE GOTTEN IMPATIENT OVA DRUGS... DRUGS I HAVE ABUSED IT FOR LONG ENOUGH... CRYING OVA DRUGS MAKES YOU WEAK NOT TOUGH... IF I SHALL DIE TODAY, TOMORROW, OR NEXT WEEK... JUST KNOW I DIDN'T DIE OF DRUGS CAUSE I AM NOT DAT WEAK... (REALLY DON'T NEED REPLIES JUST THOUGHT I WOULD DROP A PIECE THAT WOULD RELATE TO AT LEAST HALF DA PEEPS ON HEA AND NO I DON'T OR HAVE NEVA SMOKED DAT YAYO HOLLA) |
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11-12-03, 08:51 AM | #2 | |
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Ok piece. The sturcture was good and the rythme scheme is well put. Drugs hurt and kill people and ruin peoples lives. They become such a "need" that you would do anything for them. They are a bad thing to get involved with so stay away from the drugs. All and all good poem.
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11-12-03, 10:46 AM | #3 | ||
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What???????????Aight but nowt special..........Sounds more l;ike an overlong Chorus or somethin..........Fairplay to ya though
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