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09-19-04, 08:19 PM | #1 | |
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come on....
I do a open mic like every 2 days somebody nominate me for the open mic award for one of them... I do this because of my Love of rap but I would love an award please LOL ok pease READ IT ALL!!! ALL this is True I never Lie in my Lyrics at ALL Attention America!!!! you have been told Various Lies I'm sure to most of you this note has not at all taken you by surprise we should realise we're not perfect for our sake the countries actions multiple times have been sugar coated We hear speeches in meatings... told by congress claiming they have wrote it but has been written and used in the past Bush I caught using his old Fathers Mess (true) Bush isn't the worst, I Caught John Kerry who has told many lies to the press... he claims that with War he is not involved... but even the records proved and implied he served time in Vietnam!!and he Indueced pain onto civillians who weren't a threat no guns held,he killed all foregins even ones who shown no disrespect (true) Let's shift over to the Media... False News isn't exclusive to Globe (tabloits) they said the Governer Of my state shown that the NCAA meatings are repeatedly Postponed....though he told during the Debates..he states: "Rob is not one to let the races wait" (real quote) I don't Hate but to him, I show no praise because my school books are no way up to date How do a school like mine hold the same books for over a decade?(true) Even Rappers like us...have flaws...in fact... Snoop Dogg calimed he takes his movies more to heart then taking part of his rap!!! whic heart me Deeply...I been buying his cd's... Bow the boy sweeter then Diabeties (true) Now it becomes aparent...that this country is Bearin the most people in the state of not Caring... the world hasn't changed I still face Store clerks staring so pretty much, our quote "in GOD we trust" it's like we're arguing with the bible so we're only "with GOD we Fuss ok this is my 5th open mic I think... also my 2nd this week Let's get some crits... I try not to rap about guns,smoking of any mainstream crap but me doing that is my downfall becuase I get the least crits....
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09-19-04, 08:44 PM | #2 | |
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IP:
please please please
i'm sorry aint dissin nobody or doing a collb or talkin about guns and shit but damn can I please get a crit pleeeeeaas?
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09-19-04, 09:01 PM | #3 | |
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IP:
puhleeeeeeaaase
crit b4 the mods close this due to inactivity sees you're criting everything BUT my open mics why?
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09-20-04, 06:09 PM | #4 | |
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IP:
wow still no feedback.........
I'll reurn the favor I us don't want this to go to waste
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09-20-04, 10:28 PM | #5 | |
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IP:
I must be e 1st dude t Up
4 times without getting no feedback wat-so-ever... I jus loss all momentem in RV right now crit if you want in 20 min. I would like the mods to close this damn even the niggas i'm coo with aint crit for shit fuck this even without crits i'm still gon' print peace
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09-21-04, 05:06 PM | #6 | |
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IP:
yo mods close this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!
I wanna spit another one and this gettin slept on BAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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09-24-04, 05:04 PM | #7 | |
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IP:
fuck that lol
yo i worked hard on this shit so somebody crit this pleaaaasse <~~~awaits for 100 more open mics or done b4 anyone crits peace
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09-24-04, 08:50 PM | #8 | |
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IP:
uppin
no one has upped this much b4 so plz crit
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09-24-04, 11:13 PM | #9 | ||
Better than you..
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IP:
yo this drop was good......nice to see a change from guns n bitches to something of a little more relevance.... i can tell u put a lot of time into this, atleast i thought it was interesting i think it payed off.
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09-24-04, 11:27 PM | #10 | ||
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IP:
Wasnt Really Feeling It I Hate Politics It Was Ok I Guess But I Just Aint Really Like It It Aint Flow Consitent At All And Well I Didnt Like It At All No Hate Just A Honest Opion
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09-25-04, 04:57 AM | #11 | |
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IP:
^is cool
but all of it wasn't about poiltics I got on snoop in there too and others peace
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