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10-04-04, 12:00 PM | #1 | ||
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Hola Hovito
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16 bars over Hola Hovito. just looking for feedback on flow, lyrics, and delivery. any feedback is welcome.
i replied to Breathe and Jealous Negroes. www.soundclick.com/focusonthemic I deleted all your other threads, and will continue to do so until you reply to 2 differenet songs FOR EACH DROP. Your spam ain't cool. -Phenom
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10-11-04, 05:11 AM | #2 | ||
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i love this beat by da way good choice
buffering...56gay yes im still on 56gay aight here it is...off da bat i can tell ur vocals ur too loud...turn it down some...if ur spittin on a computer mic with a stock soundcard go to volume control and put ur mic volume down to about around da middle so u dont clip dat much..(yeah i used to record on a comp mic LOL)anyways...flow is there...just u know get a lil bit hype or just exxagerate some of ur words i guess wat im trying to say is put some feelings to it..feel me?but i other than that i like wat u got here.... keep spittin doggy.. 1
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