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05-06-04, 07:46 PM | #1 | |
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Im Gunna Warn Ya
IP:
Im gunna warn ya right now that i come real fast,
but if you want a piece of me motha fucka just ask. i dont mess around playin with the shoven and pushin, i'll mush yo damn face like a feathery cushion. i'll throw a couple jabs and then come back with the hook. i'll read yo damn moves like im readin a book. just look- at what i do bitch, take a fuckin note. when i put on my cap, wrist wraps, and leather coat. i keep em commin in mass, i keep em commin like cash. i keep em commin like a Smith & Wess blowin yo ass. i mark my spot, then sit back and squat, territory is mine, i just tied the knot. its a brand new plot for this jock so watch, when i take off my shades you see im lookin at your crotch. its not, what you think girl i just cant stop. i started way down and now im cummin on top! its hot! Hit me up with some feed back |
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05-06-04, 07:52 PM | #2 | ||
New to RB
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IP:
I liked it.it was cool.The way you kept yo flow right keep it comin
holla at ya girl |
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05-06-04, 08:38 PM | #3 | ||
Flyweight
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IP:
It was straight, but u could of done better, but i liked it, stay up!!!!!!!
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05-06-04, 10:06 PM | #4 | |
Flyweight
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IP:
hey, thanks for the feedback..keep it commin, let me know what you think
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