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02-28-03, 03:20 PM | #1 | |
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~War Mythology~
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just something i had to write for english class on
Ares(the god of war) to the 2000 bc beat The sound of war playing from life’s instruments Sent to sin on this earth in light increments Stories of the battlefield, fact or fiction? These raps I’m spitting portray ruthless leaders that attack with vengeance Let me paint you a picture…illustrate the art of war The God of War, Ares…swinging rods and swords Moving slow in his road of patience…his only motivation Become a living legend, or send a wish to the heavens He constructed a legion of soldiers and his theory is That knowledge is power, even without experience Its clearly this…he conquered lands and masterfully mastered The battlefield techniques, and accurately captured Enemy troops…and this is just a glimpse of the proof But on his odyssey home he put a dent in the truth With a deafening glance, and a threatening plan He found a force more invincible then any weapon of man As reality sets and falls upon his thick skull It hits him hard like running in front of a brick wall Slipping on reality he needs to bend his grip While his philosophy was deep like endless pits Knowledge is power and through his power he knows he’s the best But he still can’t catch his breath like heavy blows to the chest He visualized himself dying in a war…gun 4 gun This is war mythology Ares 101 |
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02-28-03, 10:26 PM | #2 | |
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Hey yo actually made history interesting to read... lol...
Yo man this piece was pretty good man... strong vocab and pretty good rhymes, descent flow and all... I was feeling most of this, specially the wordplay, but it slowed down at the end... you didn't end as strong as you started... |
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