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02-08-04, 02:54 AM | #1 | |
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3rd Round KnockOut(Freeman Diss)
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This is tha 3rd installment of this epic diss..hmm..just thought i'd do a keystyle...umm..you might recognize some aspects of this..maybe tha title will remind you of it
Yo I'ma let RB know tha truth..u don't know how to rhyme U study my structure..then u copy & paste all of ya lines Freeman..ya in a bitch crew..& tha worst one in it..is u Already merked ya bitchass so I'll speak past tense, u blew I don't talk about ya content cuz it speeks for itself...shit Whenever u want a nomination..u ask ELEETE for his dick & you could never spit..its like ya mouth was sown shut Dumb fuck..putting out childish disses & telling me to grow up? U know what? Free ain't hated by all..let me use these words His fan club is 50% wack..& tha other half of them are herbs Ain't making fun of ya..looks can be decieving..dosen't matter Its just that ya face looks like.. .....................it was pounded on with a sledge hammer Shit..I bet if I showed u my ass..u would probably kiss it If u were looking for talent..u missed it..went by in an instant Yeah..I just mentioned ya faggot ass crew..damn why? I just tarnished my verse..oh well..I'll do it again..."the sky" Here look at my wisdom..I'm Ne Plus Ultra..ya absolute zero This gangster prolly thinks Scarface was played by Robert Deniro I was wrong when I said 50% were wack..I meant totally Don't ever try to remotely.. ..diss me again..stick to poetry.. ^^oh shit..that remind u of something? I know its wack Sorry..but I had to show u just how bad it looks like crap U ain't rolling nicely..Freemans just like a rigged craps game & what kind of dumbass would make an alias with his last name? I know of one..Its who this diss is to..thats what this about I doubt u can harm me..cuz u just got knocked tha fuck out! Hope you like it have fun with tha comeback |
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02-08-04, 03:00 AM | #2 | |
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IP:
damn...funny shit, all three rounds, i would hate to get on your bad side kaos, might start an open mic war haha....anyway, shit was nice just like the others, battle verses definitely seem to be a specialty of yours, you use some dope punches, not just in this verse but in the others as well...nice continuation of freeman's humiliation...<-that's my mini-rhyme feedback....i'll hit your others up as well in just a bit, but in the meantime, check out my collab w/speek ez "The Darker Side of Love" pz...
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02-08-04, 05:32 AM | #3 | ||
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Ha.. Another Diss Verse I'm Readin
This gangster prolly thinks Scarface was played by Robert Deniro That Was Nicely Put .. I Liked That Good Strucutre Nice Disses & Creativity
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02-08-04, 12:34 PM | #4 | |
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^Thank You
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02-09-04, 12:44 AM | #5 | |
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IP:
well i like the going off of canibus theme but you lost it like half way through when the rage was just too much to hold back and you just let go like a battle rap....THis was a good diss i read two of the three installments this is better than 7 i do believe...good flow....good disses the gansta line was less that original but for the most part originality was there and if i was freeman i would apoligize for whatever i did before i get ripped again.....check the open my Lyrical Fitness...LOL pz kid.........
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02-09-04, 12:33 PM | #6 | |
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^ I bet he will apoligize..
lmao...I would if I were him |
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02-09-04, 12:36 PM | #7 | |
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IP:
Apoligize for............................ ?
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02-09-04, 12:38 PM | #8 | |
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IP:
Being tha faggot you are...
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02-09-04, 12:43 PM | #9 | |
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IP:
Fuck you hoebag...
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02-09-04, 01:28 PM | #10 | ||
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IP:
You think you're dope. Ready to get your feelings hurt?
Yo I'ma let RB know tha truth..u don't know how to rhyme U study my structure..then u copy & paste all of ya lines Eh, okay Freeman..ya in a bitch crew..& tha worst one in it..is u Already merked ya bitchass so I'll speak past tense, u blew Garbage I don't talk about ya content cuz it speeks for itself...shit Whenever u want a nomination..u ask ELEETE for his dick Shit & you could never spit..its like ya mouth was sown shut Dumb fuck..putting out childish disses & telling me to grow up? Okay...pretty blah U know what? Free ain't hated by all..let me use these words His fan club is 50% wack..& tha other half of them are herbs Wack Ain't making fun of ya..looks can be decieving..dosen't matter Its just that ya face looks like.. .....................it was pounded on with a sledge hammer *sigh* Shit..I bet if I showed u my ass..u would probably kiss it If u were looking for talent..u missed it..went by in an instant No, stop sucking Yeah..I just mentioned ya faggot ass crew..damn why? I just tarnished my verse..oh well..I'll do it again..."the sky" Crap Here look at my wisdom..I'm Ne Plus Ultra..ya absolute zero This gangster prolly thinks Scarface was played by Robert Deniro That was retarded I was wrong when I said 50% were wack..I meant totally Don't ever try to remotely.. ..diss me again..stick to poetry.. Eh ^^oh shit..that remind u of something? I know its wack Sorry..but I had to show u just how bad it looks like crap Fuck you suck U ain't rolling nicely..Freemans just like a rigged craps game & what kind of dumbass would make an alias with his last name? Eh, okay I know of one..Its who this diss is to..thats what this about I doubt u can harm me..cuz u just got knocked tha fuck out! Shit Closer You both suck. Stop wasting people's time with these garbage ass verses. |
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