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02-28-05, 10:59 PM | #1 | ||
Ya mom massages my nuts
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Trip's Finally BACK!!!Witta New Track..CHEA!!!
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Song Title: Somebody Tell Me
All vocals done by: Triple_N I tried my hand at singing on this...yes to all that ask who sang..it was triple all the way...anyways I hope y'all like it Here da Link: http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/triplenmusic.htm
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02-28-05, 11:05 PM | #2 | ||
Only the Illist
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IP:
man that shit is DOPE like woah! goddamn... i didnt think that could be u singing but it is dopeness... lyrics are hot too and i like the whole topic of it... definatly hot shit dawg
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02-28-05, 11:09 PM | #3 | |
20/20 VisioN
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jea i liked dis shit
good EQIng and shit wif the chorus, sounds good also dope flow and voice overall good quality and beat im feeln dis 9/10
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02-28-05, 11:10 PM | #4 | ||
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OMG triple your my number 1 idol mayn, thats dopiness i like the singing its outa no where pretty good shit man the beat was dope your verses were even tight ass well, but you really surprised me with the singing yo, that just came outta no where and its actaully good, this prob one of my favorite ones from you, i couldnt sing that good my lungs gone yo, i dont even smoke they just i cant sing period i dont understand your so damn talented, DAMN
this dope a track peace keep doin that ish |
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02-28-05, 11:14 PM | #5 | ||
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aight man its playin.....
lol singin...blah...it was a nice swing tho... first verse...its real..i can relate..flow was ok seemed like it fell off at one part...lyrics was touchin.. chorus...was straight sounds betta then openin singin.. second verse...lyrics is still hot man...flow is betta then first verse...emotion is good in both verses by the way.. bridge is good place for it to go..third verse...still hot lyrics never fell off... overall i like this track ckuz it bought the reality to people that dont go threw what we go threw...woulda been betta wit a female singin the chorus tho..
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02-28-05, 11:17 PM | #6 | ||||
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Listening as i drop feedback...singing startin to be a common thing now...nice flow...beats good...quality is decent (and i'm on lo-fi)...this is a dope track overall i like this beat is good wording is decent hook perhaps you shoulda got someone else to sing but a good attempt anyways.
RTF plz http://community.rapverse.com/showt...853#post1992853
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02-28-05, 11:19 PM | #7 | ||
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thats a fresh beat man, like how you blend the singing in with your rappin too, solid man, good lyrics, i was feeling it, keep it up
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02-28-05, 11:28 PM | #8 | |
New to RV
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This is probably one of the nicest songs i've heard on RV since I been here, I gotta give this a 9/10. Even the Harmony in the chorus flowed through nice and smooth with the diffrent vocal pitches. Cant wait till you drop more stuff. I agree if you re-do this add a female to sing or sing along with you on the chorus. Stay up man 1
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02-28-05, 11:31 PM | #9 | |
Hell yeah
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lol dont become like usher,since he knew he could sing he didnt stop,but everybody said it for me,dope track man,good track,good beat,chorus is dope as fuck,something to download and to pût on a cd
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02-28-05, 11:46 PM | #10 | |
Flyweight
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this is the first A that I have heard on here. The lyrics are simple but they hit the nail like a hammer fo sure, the singin was on key on the hook, so that made it even better. yeh the 2nd verse was a step up, and real tight, it was real life sh*t. "only heard book, when used in the past tense" that is a dope line. I give it an A. you need to hit me up about my mixtape, rhymerelated77@yahoo.com, I will be making all the beats. Get at me and check out my shit if you get a chance
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02-28-05, 11:57 PM | #11 | ||
Engineer / Club Promoter
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IP:
Typing as I listen:
Vocals on intro hook are mediocre. Nothing fantastic, but nothing wack. Singing after first verse coulda used a nother layer or two on doubles. Sounds liek you missed some notes or had trouble finding tones in it. Second verse is nice - your voice at times still reminds me of XZibit's. Chorus between second and third seemed more polished for some reason. Third verse lyrically was my fav- but deliv seemed monotone through out the whole song for some reason. Had the emotion, but not the inflection which is what brought this track down for me. Chorus after the third was the best by far. Shoulda coupied that one throught out IMO. The beat for the song is okay, but I think the song is too down temp with this particular beat. You have a course voice and need a more somber yet abrasive beat for a track liek this - DMX is a perfect example as far as melding these two facets together goes. I think a diff beat and pasting that third chorus in place of the others would have made this a real heavy hitter to me. Other facets I didn't mention liek frlow and rhymescheme were at least solid enough where I didn't feel they needed any adressing.
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03-01-05, 12:01 AM | #12 | ||
C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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Hahah, very nice beat, i never thought that a person can make a beat like this stand out like u made it stand out.. i really liked the lyrics, good multi's, and i also loved the chorus.. damn man, im surprised u haven't made it yet.. wen u do.. u betta rep RV lol.. 9.9/10..
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03-01-05, 12:23 AM | #13 | ||
The Rulers Back
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this was dope by far one of tha best tracks ive heard from you...singin was pretty good betta then i could do lmao....flow was pretty good emotion was good lyrics were dope i was really feelin it listened 3 times an goin an i usally dont do that wit rv peoples so yea most def....9/10...=1=
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03-01-05, 01:07 AM | #14 | |
Drop of Genius
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yo the beat is dope,
ok your singing isnt wack but not wonderful,, shit is decent tho good thing your good at mixing and shit..... chorus was dope lyrically, vocals where decent 1st verse... lyrics was dope, your style was dope, some shit was unclear(becuase i listened on LO fi) also your voice is reall deep so you got to annunciate reall good, but this shit was dope 2nd verse.. lyrically this shit was good, this is the same shit i went thrue as a kid and shit, so i defnently feeling you on that shit, rhythm was dope on this verse.......but lo fi fucked everything up...lol... but the messsage in this song was so dope...... 3rd... the shit in this verse was dope.......this song keeps getten doper the more i listen....... man this is the best song on RV,.....but yo this shit is truthful yo... word is bond Dopest track on RV ....word is bond... the singing on the end was dope....lol kinda reminded me of linkon park..lol dope track yo |
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03-02-05, 08:36 AM | #15 | ||
Odi et Amo
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Let's break this down...
Concept: you can start bitching and say this type of song has been done over and over again which is true of course but you can't deny the sense of reality in the lyrics. The rawness, the "in your face" attitude...how can you not love this? Had a sort of helpless vibe (especially in the hook,crying out for somebody,everybody,anybody..." to explain why it has to be like that) and yet a feeling of strength over it. This was so pure, straight spitting from the core, own life experiences that many people can relate to. You managed to paint a picture so close to reality in your listener's head. Props for that... Vocals: kinda surprised me with the singing, may not have been from top quality but still, it's better than many other 'so-called' singers. Your deep voice is so smooth,on hook as well as on verses. I have listened to it quite a few times because it takes a while to get used to you singing. The more I listened to it, the more I liked it. Hook is catchy as well, easy to sing along and it gets in your head pretty fast. The vocals on the intro were good, you stayed quite consistent with them throughout the whole song. Beat and Flow: definately feeling this beat, brought it out quite well. Flow only fell off just a little in first verse but had it on lock for the rest of the song. Can't really give any bad comments concerning this, beat is quite personal I guess...you either like it or you don't Emotion: I mean the way you brought the lyrics to life, the way we hear them coming out of your mouth. I felt the emotional value of the lyrics was clearly present in your deliverance, you managed to spit it emotional yet strong. You made us feel that what you're saying is real and nothing to play with, didn't fall of once in my opinion. Stayed very consistent with the emotion... Everything blended in quite good, no bad comments on the mixing. I do enjoy listening to you sing, don't need to get someone else to do it in my opinion. I listened to it several times because this is (one of the) best songs on RV at the moment. Yup, Triple's back for sure...and how... DQ
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