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Old 04-12-07, 09:11 PM   #1
DaTrusHurtz
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29. docholiday (0-0) vs. 30. -Coop- (0-0)

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G.B.A
Gimmick Battle Association


Cartoon Character Battles

Pretend as if you ARE the cartoon character you have been assigned. Don't diss your opponent, diss your opponent's character. You may use the picture if you wish, but do not have to. Bring out the personals and the heat. Good Luck.

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docholiday as Felix the Cat

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-Coop- as Garfield


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Verses Due Monday at 12:00PM Pacific
10 Line Minimum, No Line Limit
Biting = Ban
Feeding = -2 Votes
Swaying = DQ
Must Vote On 4 Battles And Post Your Links
Votes Due Wednesday Night
New Battles Up Thursday Morning
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Old 04-13-07, 02:21 AM   #2
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Aight.

10 will be enough.
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Old 04-13-07, 06:23 AM   #3
docholiday
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Fuck a check in, wont be on all weekend so here..........

Fuck a fat cat try n fight back wit wack rap I easilly handle ya
Have ya spittin sick when I leave ya OD'in after spikin ya lasagne *
Hate mondays? shit happens like kits rappin so go ahead please bite
An i'll split ya down the centre so pussy ya got nothin left to right
Aint talkin tale of 2 kitties though, when facin field a Ws no worry
Quick flurry of shots silence ya, like a cats got the tongue of Bill Murray
So hurry an pre-write ya lil burbs type affraid to leave that cul de sac
I dont even feel like chinese food but in the booth i'll happily eat this cat
Then pull ya back till it folds n cracks honestly though at least ginger tried
Use this punch ta crack ya jaw on the left side so ya finally gotta spit right

1 more for the sake of using this link lol

Leave this bum sprayed on a world stage you past played n I got ya
By the tail till ya whailed " I aint an MC, click here I really prefer soccer"

*OD = Dogg in Garfield

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Old 04-15-07, 03:24 PM   #4
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Overkill...

Everybody knows me, yup, I've had my luck with stars
How good are you? Well, nobody knows... who the fuck you are!
I'm struck bizarre, cuz when I look at your artist? I don't think skill
I think still, that Felix was a great result... of an ink spill
That's your verse? Please, you're the reason all cats are disgraced
He should be able to see he sucks... his eyes cover half of his face!
You were only famous cuz every show back then was wimpy
And even now you look like a reject from Ren & Stimpy
I'ma speed up your losing process. You can't combat w/ this, guy
Everybody can tell he lost...But I'd rather give this catalyst why:
You suck, you're skinny, ugly, old... you're a flake and it's a fact
At least your name helps...cuz it's too often you're mistaken for a rat

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Old 04-16-07, 09:23 AM   #5
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Vote .
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Old 04-16-07, 10:09 AM   #6
docholiday
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uppin........................
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Old 04-17-07, 10:53 PM   #7
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So hurry an pre-write ya lil burbs type affraid to leave that cul de sac
I dont even feel like chinese food but in the booth i'll happily eat this cat


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I'm struck bizarre, cuz when I look at your artist? I don't think skill
I think still, that Felix was a great result... of an ink spill


Doc's punch was played, but it was okay. I disagree with Trus on the inkspill punch, I actually liked it. Flow was nice and he didn't need the recall just the fact that the cat is like black and white and could look like an inkspill is enough of a punch. I didn't like the catalyst because it wasn't worked in well and I've seen the wordplay. However, I still think that both of these facts at all outshined doc's verse pretty much completely that's why Coop gets my vote.


V/ -Coop-
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Old 04-18-07, 04:55 PM   #8
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-LINKS-

-1-http://community.rapverse.com/showpost.php?p=3160492&postcount=8
-2-http://community.rapverse.com/showpost.php?p=3160495&postcount=8
-3-http://community.rapverse.com/showpost.php?p=3160497&postcount=7
-4-http://community.rapverse.com/showpost.php?p=3160505&postcount=9
-5-http://community.rapverse.com/showpost.php?p=3160508&postcount=10
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Old 04-18-07, 06:55 PM   #9
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Fuck a fat cat try n fight back wit wack rap I easilly handle ya
Have ya spittin sick when I leave ya OD'in after spikin ya lasagne *
Decent
Hate mondays? shit happens like kits rappin so go ahead please bite
An i'll split ya down the centre so pussy ya got nothin left to right
Meh
Aint talkin tale of 2 kitties though, when facin field a Ws no worry
Quick flurry of shots silence ya, like a cats got the tongue of Bill Murray
Nah didnt feel
So hurry an pre-write ya lil burbs type affraid to leave that cul de sac
I dont even feel like chinese food but in the booth i'll happily eat this cat
lol, this was funny actually
Then pull ya back till it folds n cracks honestly though at least ginger tried
Use this punch ta crack ya jaw on the left side so ya finally gotta spit right
Nah...
Leave this bum sprayed on a world stage you past played n I got ya
By the tail till ya whailed " I aint an MC, click here I really prefer soccer"
Okish

1 funny line, 2 decent, rest wasn't feeling much, good try though

Vss

Everybody knows me, yup, I've had my luck with stars
How good are you? Well, nobody knows... who the fuck you are!
Nah, Felix was the cat with the yellow bag, he owned lol
I'm struck bizarre, cuz when I look at your artist? I don't think skill
I think still, that Felix was a great result... of an ink spill
Liked this
That's your verse? Please, you're the reason all cats are disgraced
He should be able to see he sucks... his eyes cover half of his face!
lol cool
You were only famous cuz every show back then was wimpy
And even now you look like a reject from Ren & Stimpy
lol, this was pretty funny
I'ma speed up your losing process. You can't combat w/ this, guy
Everybody can tell he lost...But I'd rather give this catalyst why:
Good wp for bein a cat, you coulda used this dope lol why did you use it as a filler for ya last bar?
You suck, you're skinny, ugly, old... you're a flake and it's a fact
At least your name helps...cuz it's too often you're mistaken for a rat
Kinda see resemblence, it was decent

Coop came better with more consistancy, but I did laugh at the chineese food/cat thing pretty hard it was cool... but from Dc that was basically it. So with more consistancy & more better punches

V// Coop
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Old 04-18-07, 08:16 PM   #10
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docholiday:
Fuck a fat cat try n fight back wit wack rap I easilly handle ya
Have ya spittin sick when I leave ya OD'in after spikin ya lasagne *
^WTF. This was kinda lame. 0.5/5
Hate mondays? shit happens like kits rappin so go ahead please bite
An i'll split ya down the centre so pussy ya got nothin left to right
^Concept is played. Decent punch tho. 1/5
Aint talkin tale of 2 kitties though, when facin field a Ws no worry
Quick flurry of shots silence ya, like a cats got the tongue of Bill Murray
^Blah. Nothing much happening. 1/5
So hurry an pre-write ya lil burbs type affraid to leave that cul de sac
I dont even feel like chinese food but in the booth i'll happily eat this cat
^Heh. Concept was alright. Punch was ok. 1/5
Then pull ya back till it folds n cracks honestly though at least ginger tried
Use this punch ta crack ya jaw on the left side so ya finally gotta spit right
^Another left/right play? Nah. 0.5/5
Leave this bum sprayed on a world stage you past played n I got ya
By the tail till ya whailed " I aint an MC, click here I really prefer soccer"
^Hm. Not really feeling this. 1/5



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Coop:
Everybody knows me, yup, I've had my luck with stars
How good are you? Well, nobody knows... who the fuck you are!
^This was ok. 1/5
I'm struck bizarre, cuz when I look at your artist? I don't think skill
I think still, that Felix was a great result... of an ink spill
^Hah. A funny diss. 2/5
That's your verse? Please, you're the reason all cats are disgraced
He should be able to see he sucks... his eyes cover half of his face!
^Lmao. Another funny diss. 2/5
You were only famous cuz every show back then was wimpy
And even now you look like a reject from Ren & Stimpy
^This was alright. 1.5/5
I'ma speed up your losing process. You can't combat w/ this, guy
Everybody can tell he lost...But I'd rather give this catalyst why:
^This was pretty nice. 2.5/5
You suck, you're skinny, ugly, old... you're a flake and it's a fact
At least your name helps...cuz it's too often you're mistaken for a rat
^Lmao. This was decent. 1.5/5



Overall this was pretty one-sided. doc' came pretty weak, didn't have too many hard hitting punches. Could of done better. Coop came pretty correct. Some lines were whack, others were pretty cool. Easy vote.






VOTE = Coop.
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Old 04-19-07, 12:02 PM   #11
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One-sided battle allthe way. Doc dropped better than some of the cats (pun intended) in theother matches, but he wasn't matching coop in this one. The first left to right was alright, played concept but cool flip. Chinese food line was meh ill give it to you though. Coop was just waaaaayyy more consistent, not to mention hard hitting. Ink spill, see he sucks and catalyst lines we're nice.

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Old 04-19-07, 12:38 PM   #12
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nuttin really,, no hate

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I'm struck bizarre, cuz when I look at your artist? I don't think skill
I think still, that Felix was a great result... of an ink spill
That's your verse? Please, you're the reason all cats are disgraced
He should be able to see he sucks... his eyes cover half of his face!

v//coop
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Old 04-19-07, 01:01 PM   #13
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Coop wins 6-0

-Coop- WINS 1-0
docholiday LOSES 0-1
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