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08-14-04, 11:59 PM | #1 | ||
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no safe sex
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Kissing is a habit and f*ckin is a game
boys get all the pleasure and girls get the pain he says he love u and believe its true but ur stomach starts to swell and he says the hell with u 16 min of pleasure, 9 mounths of pain, 3 days in the hospital,a baby with no name, the baby is a basterd, the mother is a whore, it never would of happon if the rubber hadn't tore
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So what chicks can rap too/ you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/ Respect List: AKA (down, and keepin it real) KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words) The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping) Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em') phatom (he jus got skill) LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life) fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat) |
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08-15-04, 02:39 AM | #2 | |
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hmm...i dont know if you really have a baby or you were just writing...kinda fucked up outlook on guys youve got there but if it comes from the heart its good poetry
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08-15-04, 02:52 AM | #3 | ||
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that shit isnt from u i heard that shit before u mite of changed a few words tho but no hate shawty
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08-15-04, 02:58 AM | #4 | ||
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nope i wrote it sry...and no i don't have a kid
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So what chicks can rap too/ you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/ Respect List: AKA (down, and keepin it real) KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words) The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping) Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em') phatom (he jus got skill) LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life) fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat) |
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08-15-04, 03:00 AM | #5 | ||
Evol Grafix
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no hate but u aint rite that
sorry u may have reworded it
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08-15-04, 03:12 AM | #6 | ||
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no f*ck off i wrote it....sry but u got somethin wrong with ur head...y u got to argu with a girl! mmmm sounds like u ain't got nuttin better to do...cause u can't get a girl! Do us all a favor and F*ck off
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So what chicks can rap too/ you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/ Respect List: AKA (down, and keepin it real) KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words) The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping) Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em') phatom (he jus got skill) LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life) fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat) |
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08-15-04, 03:14 AM | #7 | ||
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sounds to me like u just need more post...so u decide to write 5 post to talk to me
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So what chicks can rap too/ you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/ Respect List: AKA (down, and keepin it real) KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words) The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping) Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em') phatom (he jus got skill) LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life) fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat) |
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08-15-04, 05:55 AM | #8 | |
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tahts i a pretty good poem, but you aint puttin guyz in a good outlook.
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08-15-04, 06:02 AM | #9 | |
Light Weight
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u didnt write that shit i seen it before
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08-15-04, 07:35 AM | #10 | |
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nice poem and lol it makes us guys look bad also
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08-15-04, 10:33 AM | #11 | ||
Flyweight
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so i guess u need post too right? Wharever I wrote it get over it ur just mad cause u know that a girl can bet ur a**! So on the whole out-look of guys thing, I don't hate guys.....I love them!
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So what chicks can rap too/ you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/ Respect List: AKA (down, and keepin it real) KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words) The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping) Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em') phatom (he jus got skill) LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life) fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat) |
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08-15-04, 11:13 AM | #12 | ||
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Hi, I dont agree with ure view of guys, like them others pointed out ^^ but poetry is like that neway, it reflects the composers personality and how they see things, so as schema said, as long as it came from u, its good poetry.. Neways, it does sound familiar.. just to let u kno.
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08-15-04, 03:01 PM | #13 | ||
Banned: Cheating
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well not to be da broken record but i seen that shit before , and dont be goin all "blah blah " wit me cuz i wont listen , i liked it though some shit reworded , and you got anything else? and even if you did qoute& write & qoute right it, the outlook on us guys is messed up . but no hate all love
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08-15-04, 04:27 PM | #14 | ||
10:23 till i'm 86
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bitch shoulda been on birth control
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09-07-04, 05:34 PM | #15 | ||
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Lyrical Artist..Wassup Badgurl
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Wassup Badgurl..I liked the poem and I thought it was cool..I just thought u should of made it longer...But other than that I thought it was cool...Oh by the way..thank you for the feedback of the joint I wrote called Pornography!! I thought everybody would hate me for that but I guess they didn't..Well holla at ya boi iight..I got aim..tnt1943..and my yahoo email is mic17philly@yahoo.com..Well holla back..PEACe
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