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04-04-03, 09:33 PM | #1 | |
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She passed by and left me speechless
The realization of her being mine among others made thoughts run wild and free within Her hips swung while my jaw dangled freely with complete and sudden awe She could walk the walk and talk the talk anytime of day The flip of her hair to the licking of her lips had me As her prescence was a once in a lifetime deal, she became my one and only black queen Tell me, is this a dream or a reality? For when my eyes reopened she was gone. Leaving not just me ...left alone in my own reality Or was I dreaming? She was gone and I could not see my lonliness which stood silent....silent right next to me I became sprung From the tip of her lips to the shake of her hips The enternal remnance of 'love' disappeard from my thoughts...... _______ what do u guyz think.. Last edited by SmoothCrmnl : 04-08-03 at 12:11 AM. |
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04-06-03, 09:15 PM | #2 | ||
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i liked it. good structure
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04-07-03, 10:47 AM | #3 | |
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yo that was good shit....keep droppin shit like that man..... BIG UP'S YASELF
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04-08-03, 12:13 AM | #4 | |
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thanx ya'll i apreciate it..uppin 4 mo
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