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12-24-05, 07:11 PM | #1 | ||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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Where Ya Heart At ft. YSDAT
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www.soundclick.com/jroy
yeah peep it out there you leave feed i leave feed ----- links ----- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217403 ------------ http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=218003 |
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12-24-05, 08:08 PM | #2 | ||
..Rv Sucks..
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hmm listenin
nice into beat...gettin a feel for the song openin chorus pretty decent first verse nice flow pretty on point nice delivery nice again chorus is good 2nd verse nice drop all in all dope track never really fell off nice deliverys by both good word usage gj fellas :]
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12-24-05, 08:16 PM | #3 | ||
Tha 1st member of S.W.A
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on tha upper left side of my torso...?
lmao, ysdat, i cant make out half of wut ur sayin. prolly cuz of tha accent. LOL. aight, tha 2nd half i can make yo werds out alot betta. wu tu use 2 record? qualitys koo chorus iz koo jroy, good quality. i can make out wut sayin good. i think u guys shouldve came alot mo gangsta n commercial n shit, i think thas wut u were tryna do lol overall not bad werd
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12-24-05, 08:36 PM | #4 | ||
Light Weight
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good audio homie shit was crisp clear i liked da beat n it had real meaning keep doin ya'll's thing on here.everything flow,structure,vocab on point a bit short but hey its all good
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12-24-05, 08:52 PM | #5 | ||
The Paragraph President
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Past Tense, nice verse man, good flow and delivery lyrics were also pretty good, overall I thought you did a good job man. Ysdat you were better on this one except your vocals volume needs to be upped but I could understand you and the quality was better, lyrics were good but flow was a bit off but mainly you need to turn the vocals up.
pretty good track 1
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12-24-05, 09:24 PM | #6 | |
Hell yeah
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nice beat, i love it, really underground, nice intro, hook is dope as fuck seriously, past tense, this is your best track so far seriously, wow poetic this is pretty good, i like the flow, original, past tense you really impressed me for the hook, this should have an award seriously like the collab song of the month honestly, cuz i love this track, overall a big 10 and im serious,peace
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12-24-05, 09:38 PM | #7 | ||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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woord thanks for all the feed if u want me too drop feed hit me up with a link
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12-25-05, 12:02 PM | #8 | ||
You Love My Style.
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My negga Past fuck it i liked it Jroy ..lol
Nice delivery u getting better each track...flow was on point ....nothing bad i noticed am loving the hook wow... Ysdat ooh lord....never listened to ya shit but am impressed ya vocals were low but overall am liking the collab nice
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12-25-05, 02:49 PM | #9 | |
Whys That?
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Thanks bro .
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12-25-05, 02:55 PM | #10 | ||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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ayyy y's i think this was the smartest idea ever lol
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12-25-05, 03:02 PM | #11 | |
Whys That?
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most definitly. I had to re arange my 4 track mixtape to add this on it
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12-25-05, 03:33 PM | #12 | ||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
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lol hahahah looks as if this is the best track of december
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12-25-05, 07:12 PM | #13 | |
Whys That?
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maybe, but fuck knows.
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