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01-13-06, 11:46 AM | #1 | |
Maggot
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Diss To Chase #2
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DISS TO CHASE #2
I come with free wording while you be burdened with Whack rhymes leave cataracts in your spine my skills swift I do work you just a true jerk why your brew don’t perk Like coffee? Type softy with no talent why you won’t insert Flavor in your junk? Just a hardcore punk try ignore this chump My rhymes burn with stress and turn into flesh you just A worm no nest why you concerned about breasts? Fuss Want a perm and a dress my script sick while you wear Lip stick , you think freaky and drink deeply while uniquely Wanting to be female so you can be nailed with cock completely While sweetly wearing make as a fake butt you softer than cotton Why offer a rotten verse? You at the bottom first class with a hot ton Whacko rhymes, wanna stay good and say you hood have on A phony bandana hell you not Tony Montana bitch you not SCARFACE and a far race from that you itch for a new plot Like a ship I sail deep but you a failed freak can’t float like A boat on water, rope round throat and choke some flavor right Out this dude, you fight first just to bite verse I’ll write a label On your forehead saying “I’M TWISTED CHASE A DISGRACE TO RAP” let me arrange your strange retirement from this place Serve some cookies and milk this rookie in silk too soft and Crew false |
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01-13-06, 05:39 PM | #2 | ||||
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Don't really get what ur goin for here, cause its impossible to do what ur talkin bout, and u should avoid making 1 sentence into 2 lines, like u did with "with" Quote:
Basic multis here... dont really see why u tryin to damage this guy with basic multis that consist of no punches The rest of the song is just pretty much the same, with some punches here and there I can tell u kinda new to this thang. Keep workin. ~ UD
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01-25-06, 02:40 PM | #3 | |
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stuff off the hook for real yall
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02-23-06, 04:16 PM | #4 | |
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o...............kay
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