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12-23-06, 01:59 AM | #1 | |
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I been real.
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This is that shit you can't take you pussy/
get in my face and get straight baked like cookies/ You just some skanks I out rank, Ya'll rookies/ Ya rhymes wack, lookin back, sayin that boy shook~me/ Look in a book if ya need a hook, get~that~shit/ Ya need some nook find some puss, n hit~that~shit/ Ya want weed, got what you need, just come 2 da crib/ Try 2 jack me bitch I got heat and I will make you strip/ I'll probably take ya whip, n take a trip, head ova 2 Cali./ 2 the ground Ima strip it down, n leave ya ride in a alley/ See I get blowed by these hoes kinda like a windmill/ Ya shits old, my shits cold, thats b-cuz I been~real/ Ya rhymes R bloopers~man, they call me superman, cuz I bend~steal/ Bitch whats happenin, Its straight platinum, grill and the gems~real/ My friends~kill, ya ends~will, turn up in my pockets/ Blow out ya brains, snatch ya chain, n ya rolex watches/ Ex, Smack, Coke, Crack, man I done sold that patna/ 2 the bottom of the map, Ima bring it back, cuz I only roll on choppas/ http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3128125 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3128127 Last edited by Mayhem : 12-25-06 at 04:30 PM. |
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12-25-06, 04:31 PM | #2 | |
New to RV
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Uppin fa feedback in this bitch!!!!!!
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12-26-06, 08:47 PM | #3 | ||
Herb
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its straight killa... nothin special but not to bad homie... keep elevating
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12-27-06, 03:23 PM | #4 | |
Flyweight
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yea it aint too bad.......a lil bit of lyricism noted, but the content/topic is played tho, done heard it, id say when spittin on ish like this, u can keep it real but also keep it clever...its clever but nothin that made me go ooo shyt thats on point......
holla acha boi man |
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12-29-06, 05:46 PM | #5 | ||
Black Poet
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I want to stab my eyeballs out with a blunt knife.
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12-29-06, 06:24 PM | #6 | ||
ROFL @ u niggas since '04
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personally I dont see how this is keeping it real at all. He had no topic or concept...this belongs in a very degraded or dead cypher from like 3 years ago.
please....kill yourself....that is all |
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12-30-06, 10:27 PM | #7 | |
New to RV
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IP:
Fuck both you haters!!!!! Any1 else got something to say about it.
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01-01-07, 10:42 PM | #8 | |
New to RV
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IP:
no good i've heard it like 70 thousand times.
sorry bro but your rhymes are pretty good. |
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01-17-07, 11:19 AM | #9 | |
why so serious!!??
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first off im gonna start off wit the positive cuz every person deserves ta hear both the good and the bad bout their music. your flow was good i felt like it could go to a beat and it went together very good. ur lyrics were beyond basic but werent all oohs and ahhs lol so work on that a lil more but overall ur lyrics were decent. now for the kinda down part bout it. u gotta make people FEEL and RELATE to ur music u cant just be like "muthafucka ima blow you away im a gangsta u hoes just gay" cuz first off gangsta music is straight up played out, no creativity, and is just shit people dont wanna really hear. i feel like u can be realer get in touch with ur true emotions. anyways this was decent so keep dropping just work on what you got to say and make sure u always got links in every drop
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01-17-07, 02:06 PM | #10 | |
why so serious!!??
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oh and RTF on my open mic http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239397 do it or i'll close ur shit muhahahahaha lol j/p
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01-17-07, 08:21 PM | #11 | |
New Jack
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i thought it started off like fire turned to ok but anyway i think its a 8.5
and i heard this line before so your not all that real: " they call me superman, cuz I bend~steal" give me feed on my open mic when you see me wiley d |
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