Ok we guna get straight to business:

First up

""""""""""FLOW""""""""""""""



Now most importantly, what ya dont wana do Is stretch your bars, i used to do that and Everythin sounds FUCKED UP.

Stretched Example:

Ya gettin Tossed like Sallads// your weak punchlines arent Exceptable or Vallid// in this battle you lack Talent// this guys getting fucked up More than Eminem in Drug Balleds//

see stretched flows are kinda like Run On sentences............

The Right Way Example:

Ya gettin TOssed like Sallads Tonite cuz yo weak Punchlines arent Exceptable or Vallid// His lack of Talent is whats gettin this bitch Fucked up more than Eminem in Drug Balleds//

Enough about flow, i think flows sumtin that comes naturall its hard to learn


"""""""""""""Punche LINES"""""""""""""""



ok this is what u dont wana do In battles, avoide usin weak ass punchlines or vocab like this:

Example of weak shit:

Im stingen this bitch like bumble bees, i'll have him prayen on both knees for ever fuckin wit me/ jese/ i cant believe this guy is wack as can be/ help me im stuck battlin this fuckin Dummy/

see never just ryhme words, that wont get u NO WHERE, u gota be Creative, here are sum Examples of Good Punches..........

Example of Good Punchlines:

Just to "feel up" Grown men this bitch would become a "Tailor"//
Forget women eh fag, the only way you'de get yo hands on "Fish" is if ya became a "Sailor"

You've just been Dismantled, ya broken and need a Healer//
I'll break it down In lamens
Ya couldnt "Hit Me" if we was playin "Black Jack" and you were the Card Dealer"//

Spittin bad Ryhmes is bad for this kids "Higeen"//
He couldnt "break or disinigrate me" if he was Labeled "Listereen"//

If ya think you will Defeat me Ya must be livin in a Fantasy//
talk shit again and I'll be forced to shove a "Tampon" in yo mouth then call you a "Pussy"//

This Kid aint hard his Spits are Pathetic// we should all call you "CHARMIN" cuz you solf enought to wipe my ass Wit//

i hope yall are gettin this, its pretty easy



"""""""""""MULTI'S"""""""""""""""


Ok ya need multies, very important, it spices up yo verse just watch

Multi Example:

I'll kill you like they did Jason, Take you outa TOWN to a CAMP GROUP and have you DROWN// You're underwater screams wont Stir a SOUND lettin me Bounce and Escape b4 the Bodies FOUND//

This bitch couldnt cum QUICK if he stuck his DICK inbetween 2 TITS// His pathetic SPITS are broken like Old mens Wooden HIPS and more boring than played out CHICK FLICKS//

I think u get the point.................


"""""""""""""""Meta's"""""""""""""""""""""""

lol ask sum1 else im still workin on that


Be as creative as possible, use similies, and punches that can relate to other things like you seen above

I dont have time to explain more this

Just take my advice on The punches and you'll elievate,


PEACE OUT