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06-06-04, 03:47 AM | #1 | ||
Middle Weight
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U want to be a thug???
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ya constantly speak on thugs wit guns, when most of u not//
if ya was stuck in these circumstances ya want it to stop// we living in a world where money is king// u get stuck up for ya uptowns and hilfiger jeans// now a days u can blink and u wind up dead// my nigga got shot on his porch cause his shirt was red// and his brother died from a drive by, blessings I sended// just turned 6 months and his life already ended// there no pretending this sh!t happens everyday// my yung nigga from highschool runs my local gang// got jumped, then broke their legs, stuck in court wit an open case// and every parade there's another victim slain// and all because where u live and where u were rasied// they get younger in age, they role deep but ain't sh!t// a teck splits, pulled in a van, now five souls lift// emptied clip, knock down heads like he was bowlin// and niggas wearin more RIP shirts than vintage hulk hogan// I seen madd niggas die, friends and foes// hate to see families cry at their funerals// |
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06-06-04, 11:27 AM | #2 | ||
Dont Push Me Of Regret It
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IP:
erm...it was ok for a newb..need to keep each line the same lenght..also rap aint bout guns sex and shit..so try to rap on a deeper topic...keep tryin tho..
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06-06-04, 03:12 PM | #3 | ||
(00)O=(00) <-- I will knock you the fuck out........
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IP:
i wasnt feelin it u need to keep workin on ya game keep elevatin iight kid...........................
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06-06-04, 04:38 PM | #4 | ||
Banned: Biting
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IP:
i didint like it keep elevating
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06-15-04, 11:48 PM | #5 | ||
Flyweight
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IP:
It'z Iight ...........importan Topic Juz' It'z Done Alot Try A Better Topic
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so what chicks can rap too/ u won't battle me cause i can beat u/ |
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