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07-25-06, 01:15 PM | #1 | ||
~Spitten Fire~
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Black Dragon feat. Woo - Queen City Anthem
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231660
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=231654 ------------------------------- juss an anthem bout my city......my boi Woo free'd his part.........aiite 'preciate any feedback......... www.myspace.com/blackdragonsic ^^ Click "Queen City Anthem" or http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=4193293 ^^ Click Lo-fi for Dial Up and Hi-fi for dsl or cable........ pz ~1~ I WILL RETURN ALL FEEDBACK!!! Last edited by Black Dragon : 07-25-06 at 01:28 PM. |
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07-25-06, 03:25 PM | #2 | ||
Fuck Parents
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u korean or somethin?
i was expectin u to sound retarted but ya got a pretty good voice actually lol beat is fuckin sick. flow doesnt seem too natural imo for some reason, i mean it's not choppy or anything just seems like somethin's bein forced dunno what it is tho. lyrics are decent, that rep ya hood type shit. hook is iight not too catchy tho. 2nd verse starts off nicely, damn sounds like u stepped it up a notch, oooh im feelin this now lol damn kinda short tho, was expectin a 3rd verse. maybe ur just lazy like me heh anyway solid track mayne, keep droppin
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07-25-06, 03:32 PM | #3 | ||
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lol nah man I'm Chinese.......... and da second verse wuz my crew member Woo......but yo big ups to givin me some feedback.......'preciate it......
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07-25-06, 06:21 PM | #4 | |
I don't lose
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intro is good sound confident then you loose it in your verse man
you just dont sound confortable seems like your still reading....n just getting it out.... not cocky enough for the beat.....i unno thas what i think....yep
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07-25-06, 06:40 PM | #5 | ||
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'preciate da feedback...............
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07-26-06, 07:37 PM | #6 | ||
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