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05-01-07, 12:58 PM | #1 | |
Addicted
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Dat Hot Shit!!!!on My Way..........enstinctz New Crack
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=5296788
Beat=soundclick shit..... verses and hook = Enstinctz enjoy left feed on : http://community.rapverse.com/showp...885&postcount=4 http://community.rapverse.com/showp...887&postcount=4 |
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05-04-07, 11:12 PM | #2 | |
Herb
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IP:
I'm liking the swag on the track, first verse was good, good flow didnt drop it once.
Hook was normal nothing great but it suit the purpose. 2nd verse was good, at times idk maybe im slow but couldnt keep up wit some of ur sentences lol 3rd verse again decent good only thing i would say is at times ur voice is a little high pitched not sure if i feel it completely maybe id have to hear more tracks. and other than maybe just up the lyrics a bit. feeling the beat, the concept and flow. I hate being a critic lol |
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05-09-07, 04:47 PM | #3 | ||
New to RV
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IP:
I like the beat. Real west Coastish.
The flow was aiigh, it started to get alil' more solid in the middle of the track. Real real nice quality. The hook wasn't hittin' on to much for me, it was aiigh, but it could've been alil' more creative. Tha 2nd verse, you doin' that lil' runn off the line flow n it's gettin' ya off beat. Tha third verse was ok. Ya presence n everything was coo, I could hear ya well, but tha way ya delivered it was kinda dry. It wasn't much character behind it, feel me? Overall, it was an ok track. |
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05-09-07, 07:05 PM | #4 | ||
Nt Your Average
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IP:
I rememba u doin this as a collab ages ago, im rite ye??
SOUNDIN SIK THO!!! i'll leave more detailed feed that, ur voice is stillllll sik!
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