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02-10-04, 11:27 AM
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Beauty to a blind man
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sometimes I find myself with the window open letting my mind wonder outside
hoping i put enough raw emotion and detail in my lines to describe beauty to a man thats blind let my words become his eyes to the point he tilts his eyebrows showing surprise and puts his face in his hands and crys, an in between sighs i hear him say "At least i can say i saw beauty before i died" For me to describe equality is assanine like making somebody portray the skyline thats blind For neither one of us have seen what you ask us to explain Bloodied hands is the only thing from Lady Liberty's Remains Me to describe fairness is asking to describe walking from a man thats parapalegic Because the bottom line is we can't tell you about it if we haven't seen it |
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02-10-04, 12:54 PM
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Fuck me man... That touched my heart... ^Right there... This was deep... This is my type of thing... Love reading topics that are this deep... Shit man... This touched me... Im thinking of dropping some poetry... Half the shit a do practically is anyway... Keep dropping stuff this deep... And i'll respect you forever... Hit me up on AIM please... Pz... |
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02-10-04, 01:00 PM
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I appreciate it, i'll holla at u when i get outta class.
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02-11-04, 04:44 PM
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and up we go
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02-11-04, 05:23 PM
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"Bloodied hands is the only thing from Lady Liberty's Remains"
This line realy touched because of what America is curently going through. With all the crime in my city and my best friend at war yea that really hit me
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02-11-04, 05:49 PM
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yo this was deep!!! i lyk this 1 a lot!!!!!!
..........fav part............ let my words become his eyes to the point he tilts his eyebrows showing surprise and puts his face in his hands and crys, an in between sighs i hear him say "At least i can say i saw beauty before i died" that was madd gud......tuched my heart since i hav a friend who is almost blind and its tuff 2 explain the beautiful things that u see............keep droppin
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02-11-04, 07:57 PM
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ITs funny cuz i met a blind person the other day and that made me write this because i was trying to describe why people consider Andre 3000 'strange'
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02-11-04, 11:14 PM
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I really felt this piece...hd a great deal of emotion and true power to it...creative..and your lines held such detailed emotion...very good keep it up man pz
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