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12-19-03, 12:35 PM | #1 | ||
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*Wordplay*(A must Read)
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I’m the KING you should just be happy I let ya’ll Graceland
I’m still on the paper chase while I’m roaming the wasteland I pace sand looking for haters, watch the hand by my waistband It’ll misplace blands Bus’ putting you in your rightful place man As I deface and with haste stand on the equator so bus will see Both halves of the world individually, Can anybody kill me? Ya’ll are standing with hands on B and you still can’t feel me Even though I sonned ya’ll illegitimately like I’m Jesse Jackson Yo that’s just the facts dun, you know Bus’ll break your back son So you got to get treated with traction, Bus’ll snatch your faction While you gaze with laudation and satisfaction at our great skill Your fates real and your mistakes seal your life but you can’t deal Cause no beast Norman can stop bus’ LECTuRE as his deBates kill TPP Gate seals but we stay on point cause we’re sharp in the head I hammerheads so you might just find this lyrical shark in threads Rip me to shreds? I’ve seen more wood knots in a carpenters shed... My charismatic verbal, brighter than the light of day Voice so ill no need for fuckin wordplay But you told me to work on mic presence I told you I could murder a beat in seconds You looked passed when I wrote that raw diction Overlooked the fact I was rippin right precision Ya mental lackin creative lyrical vision Fuck telling the truth I'ma rip you all in fiction So bring it, if you're better than the rest My knowledge alone, a catalyst for ya death Damage the chest cavity wit a single verb Shatter the nerve, balance the body count wit my twisted words My mental has reached it final stage Cracking the alpha numeric code on every page Aramaic slang spit at any person who turned Toxins release thru my speech, all will burn Need not trust anyone who speaks weak on me They've all spilt blood, when punched wit a syringe of disease Tired of cats believin lies, assumin's bad for ya health want know about Prov, I'll tell you myself how I came up, grew to be a man rip ya spinal cord wit my bare hand Insane, crazy thoughts run thru the mind connect dots to create the profile for the lyrically blind Peeps who can't speak in rhythmic intellegence leave the mic alone ya beliefs are totally fuckin irrelavant the hellbot swingin swords to chop ya mandible tearin ya flesh frame to uncountable decimals ya pitaful fuckin wit this design of pure evil body count higher than the slain race of jewish people... Verbal assassination, a deadly combination, I shine like radiation A new generation, fresh spirit of innovation without imitation The most raw, the conspiracy, the theory of a revolution Simple solutions, authority vendetta is my divine retribution The poignant professional, suppressing thoughts into sharp rhymes Limitless ideas, representin a minority becoming major in time Personifying perfection, more superior upon closer inspections Stand five feet away from peeps, coz my rhymes give 'em erections Chemical fusions, the deadly combination of 12 acidic MC's Poignant Professeurs, bitch, sick spits with 100 year guarentee's Electrifying verbals, branded into brains with no hope of escape Unforgettable rhymes, implant in minds, distorting regular shapes Lyrical fortification, incinerate accolades into outer space Positive mentality, hard-hittin rhymes spit at incredible pace I atomize MC's, leave em demised, paralyzed and soul-deprived Eternally blazin, shit, theres not been one MC whose soul-survived... |
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12-19-03, 12:36 PM | #2 | ||
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Deva Lewd Young Nyce |
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12-19-03, 12:56 PM | #3 | ||
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..uPPIN..
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12-19-03, 01:02 PM | #4 | |
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Really good. I thought this was the shit. Could tell you spent time on it. Intersting how you swithced the beat on the second verse. Nice words.
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12-19-03, 02:15 PM | #5 | ||
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..Still Uppin...
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12-19-03, 02:31 PM | #6 | |
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Bitten off Canabis.
DiE. . |
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12-19-03, 02:48 PM | #7 | ||
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...you gotta be crazy...^^...don't be mad cause you suck...
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12-19-03, 02:56 PM | #8 | ||
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yo
this is the shit this sik i dunno tho if its bitten i don thnk is if not thn uz a dan keep at it sfe peace out |
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12-19-03, 03:02 PM | #9 | ||
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You Bit Cannibus. .
Lines to prove it. . It’ll misplace blands Bus’ putting you in your rightful place man Yo that’s just the facts dun, you know Bus’ll break your back son So you got to get treated with traction, Bus’ll snatch your faction You aren't BUS are you?. . Can someone set this kid straight?. . Wack ass fuck. -Formula.
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12-19-03, 03:19 PM | #10 | |
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^ My point exacly. Fuck off you little biter.
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12-19-03, 03:27 PM | #11 | |
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very impressive i d like to see more work from you this is real flames/
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12-19-03, 03:29 PM | #12 | ||
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yo
rite on! sos kid i agrre is bitten off can-i-bus feedbak on >>http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99921 sfee peace outt Last edited by |>SWIFTWAKYA<| : 12-19-03 at 03:31 PM. |
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12-19-03, 03:33 PM | #13 | |||
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yo homie this flow was tight........really lookin forward to see more homie........dunno if u bit or not,but it really dont matta cuz if u didnt ..then that means u got skill..... if u did then u jus hidin n beign a dumbass not wantin to find a voice.....but newayz.....the shit was hot n i liked.........good vocab flow n evrything...keep at it son
peace
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12-19-03, 03:35 PM | #14 | ||
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I'm a huge 'can' fan and I don't recall that line? but once again I don't remember every on of his lines..I thought the piece was excellent..
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12-19-03, 03:37 PM | #15 | |
Mona Lisa.
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bitin like cod!!!!!
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