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Old 11-04-09, 07:03 AM   #1
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why did raverse split from rapbattles again?

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cuz i can't imagine the concept of rapbattles failing more than this
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and what the fuck is a rapverse anyway, an excuse to never do anything with rap ever?

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The first thing to keep in mind when writing a rap verse is the topic. A Rap Verse means nothing if it is about nothing. So first things first.. What is the song name? Is there already a hook that you are wanting to write a verse to? And if neither, what frame of mind are you in, and what exactly is the point you are trying to convey in your verse? These things right here can establish a topic for you, now you're on your way.

Secondly, you want to establish the meter, or flow, of the song that this verse will be for. Depending on if your verse is for an ATL crunk style beat or a slower Texas style beat can affect how your verse should be written. Also, depending on if the verse is to be rapped quick, normal, or slow to the beat is also a major factor. Usually, a rap verse has 16 bars, which equals 2 rhymes per bar. If you were doing a Texas style verse, you might draw your rhymes out though, and only end up with 16 rhymes to a verse, as opposed to 32 - Where as in some instances such as a New York style verse or just personal prefernce, such as Twista or Tech N9ne's styles, you may end up with as many as 64 in a Verse.

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shouldn't a site that calls itself rapverse touch on these things from time to time?
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theres like 3 people that write rap verses on here and try to get better by being on this site, everyone else should be kicked of this site and we should get a new batch of kids that want to use the site for what it was ment for
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Old 11-04-09, 07:05 AM   #2
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witty, clever comments are welcome, but keep in mind that you are not cool when replying to anything that i say
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thank you
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Old 11-04-09, 04:32 PM   #3
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another one of these gay ass threads?
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Old 11-04-09, 04:59 PM   #4
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i dont remember just ask strobe..
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Old 11-04-09, 06:50 PM   #5
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lol, everyone that was at least decent in text moved on to audio.
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Old 11-04-09, 06:51 PM   #6
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dude this is old news home boy we all know this bro this is a rap site and whatever else you got to say yea.....but check it......this site gots to much hate thats why it died down yo everybody is to cocky and shit....you dont see that shit on RB now do you?
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Old 11-04-09, 06:53 PM   #7
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dude this is old news home boy we all know this bro this is a rap site and whatever else you got to say yea.....but check it......this site gots to much hate thats why it died down yo everybody is to cocky and shit....you dont see that shit on RB now do you?



yeah, actually THEY DO

they all ride each others dick and coat tails

and bash ne thing or anyone that isn't from their home board
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Old 11-04-09, 10:21 PM   #8
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dude this is old news home boy we all know this bro this is a rap site and whatever else you got to say yea.....but check it......this site gots to much hate thats why it died down yo everybody is to cocky and shit....you dont see that shit on RB now do you?

Actually, yes I do see this on RB... the mods over there are assholes... I actually got banned from that site yesterday because one of the mods decided to be a smart ass after i asked a simple question... "Who are the good emcees on the site (for the purpose of battling or collabing so i can shake a little rust off)... most kats were real kool about the question... but then mister "beef bringer" got all up in arms when i basically told him i didn't give a shyt about his 18xHOF awards...after he told me (without knowing who i am.... or the fact that i had actually been a member of RB since '04...) that everyone was better than I am... so when i decided to addres the dude... very diplomatically i might add... his panties got all bunched up and the fucker banned me... so as far as I'm concerned RB can suck a fat one...

Really... at least RV has NEVER been that petty... if you talk shyt to folks... expect them to talk back... if you can't take it, you DEFINITELY don't need to be a mod!

BTW... I came to RV for the same reason that I'm not over at RB now... bastards banned me after i ran through one of there so-called top guys at the time... lol... 5 years later and the fuckers still holding a grudge...sad! (yeah banned for the second time)

Fuck 'em, I say!
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Old 11-05-09, 03:01 AM   #9
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Actually, yes I do see this on RB... the mods over there are assholes... I actually got banned from that site yesterday because one of the mods decided to be a smart ass after i asked a simple question... "Who are the good emcees on the site (for the purpose of battling or collabing so i can shake a little rust off)... most kats were real kool about the question... but then mister "beef bringer" got all up in arms when i basically told him i didn't give a shyt about his 18xHOF awards...after he told me (without knowing who i am.... or the fact that i had actually been a member of RB since '04...) that everyone was better than I am... so when i decided to addres the dude... very diplomatically i might add... his panties got all bunched up and the fucker banned me... so as far as I'm concerned RB can suck a fat one...

Really... at least RV has NEVER been that petty... if you talk shyt to folks... expect them to talk back... if you can't take it, you DEFINITELY don't need to be a mod!

BTW... I came to RV for the same reason that I'm not over at RB now... bastards banned me after i ran through one of there so-called top guys at the time... lol... 5 years later and the fuckers still holding a grudge...sad! (yeah banned for the second time)

Fuck 'em, I say!

i like that first song that came up on your soundclick, dont know if i really like your style but the content is pretty dope. why you still reppin oyd?
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Old 11-05-09, 10:13 PM   #10
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i like that first song that came up on your soundclick, dont know if i really like your style but the content is pretty dope. why you still reppin oyd?

Believe it or not... OYD is doing a lot outside of RV... the main cats anyways... they gave me a chance to be in the crew when other cats wouldn't... they stuck by me when i was having comp issues and wasn't active for about a year.... so i stick by them... Tito pushes me... Enygma pushes me... I mean kats are actually doing shows (Tito is doing the Zulu Nation anniversary up in NY with all the old school heavyweights this month so it's a REALLY good look for the crew right now)... i stick with those who take this shyt serious.... just cuz we ain't as active on RV it doesn't mean we ain't getting it done outside of it...

I'd be more active on RV if kats actually battled like back in the day... i gots no problems with that... i'm prolly one of the few that welcome challenges from the "newbs"... it makes them better and keeps me on my toes... ya gotta remember... just cuz someone is new to the site it doesn't mean they are new to hip-hop or rap...


oh... and thanks for the love on the song.... I'm more content orient than most kats... i got a family so i write about those experiences... no time to fake or front to look kool... people know real when they hear it
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Old 11-16-09, 02:01 AM   #11
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Believe it or not... OYD is doing a lot outside of RV... the main cats anyways... they gave me a chance to be in the crew when other cats wouldn't... they stuck by me when i was having comp issues and wasn't active for about a year.... so i stick by them... Tito pushes me... Enygma pushes me... I mean kats are actually doing shows (Tito is doing the Zulu Nation anniversary up in NY with all the old school heavyweights this month so it's a REALLY good look for the crew right now)... i stick with those who take this shyt serious.... just cuz we ain't as active on RV it doesn't mean we ain't getting it done outside of it...

I'd be more active on RV if kats actually battled like back in the day... i gots no problems with that... i'm prolly one of the few that welcome challenges from the "newbs"... it makes them better and keeps me on my toes... ya gotta remember... just cuz someone is new to the site it doesn't mean they are new to hip-hop or rap...


oh... and thanks for the love on the song.... I'm more content orient than most kats... i got a family so i write about those experiences... no time to fake or front to look kool... people know real when they hear it


I didnt know O.Y.D. still did thier thing. Tito said I could rep when i contacted dude on Myspace a while back. But O.Y.D. myspace page went active and after multiple failed attempts at reaching dude. I said fuck it. I wasnt going to rep something without getting in contact with the other members and doing some songs with them. Right now Im in a group rock band and doing solo rap. Then have the band work a few songs for me as well. But i didnt know O.Y.D. did shit off the site.
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Old 11-15-09, 04:18 AM   #12
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Actually, yes I do see this on RB... the mods over there are assholes... I actually got banned from that site yesterday because one of the mods decided to be a smart ass after i asked a simple question... "Who are the good emcees on the site (for the purpose of battling or collabing so i can shake a little rust off)... most kats were real kool about the question... but then mister "beef bringer" got all up in arms when i basically told him i didn't give a shyt about his 18xHOF awards...after he told me (without knowing who i am.... or the fact that i had actually been a member of RB since '04...) that everyone was better than I am... so when i decided to addres the dude... very diplomatically i might add... his panties got all bunched up and the fucker banned me... so as far as I'm concerned RB can suck a fat one...

Really... at least RV has NEVER been that petty... if you talk shyt to folks... expect them to talk back... if you can't take it, you DEFINITELY don't need to be a mod!

BTW... I came to RV for the same reason that I'm not over at RB now... bastards banned me after i ran through one of there so-called top guys at the time... lol... 5 years later and the fuckers still holding a grudge...sad! (yeah banned for the second time)

Fuck 'em, I say!

i am banned on like 10 accounts there for beefing with faggot ass mods.the mods there abuse the fuck outta thier power thats why the site does not grow.over
80 % of that site been there over 3 years
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Old 11-04-09, 07:10 PM   #13
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is that a wise remark...cause honestly it is the real deal dude....check it bruh......instead of bashing newbs and shit you should embrace em cause there the future of this shit
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Old 11-04-09, 07:14 PM   #14
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lol, hey guys RB is better than us. Who cares lol.
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Old 11-04-09, 07:20 PM   #15
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word point is though we should of kept this site alive but we chose not to....nuff said
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