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09-08-05, 09:25 PM | #1 | |
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Our Sins
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this were ya drop ya verse...so BC could find them easier
heres mine: I was born to a Life of Crime,Speakin through my ryhmes Dad gone at the wrong time,So I settled for nicks N dimes Moms cared but wasnt around,My life like a lost and found Crazy as it sound,My whole life was mainly shifting down At school causin problems,Made my moms life a living hell Cant seem to solve them,Rap was onlything keepin me from jail Denial it seemed I act,I have love for my fam and that was fact Seemed like I kept leaving the station but forgetting my tracks I swear if I could take everything back,This wouldnt be me Wish my Sins would get lost in its tracks,So my mom could see.... |
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09-08-05, 10:05 PM | #2 | |
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Word... thankz for making the forum.. ima key mine later on tonight
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09-08-05, 10:07 PM | #3 | ||
The story goes. Bill, B.
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I'll key in tommorow afternoon...BC's requests sucked my creative juices lol
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09-09-05, 02:29 AM | #4 | |
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lol^ sorry .. but yeah ill do mine tomorrow
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09-09-05, 03:14 PM | #5 | ||
The story goes. Bill, B.
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Living a life of sin, not because of my action but metaphorically,
Simply tryna be me but riduculed by unwritten rules given to me, Pondering why it is that I can't puff and pass when it's my turn, Laundering? No I'm just tryna walk out my crib and be able to return, Simple times don't come to easy so I take nothing for granted, Proud to be me cuz my outlook on life just happens to be slanted, Living the life of the middle class when clearly that ain't the case, Speaking to me ain't like Tyrone, known only to be black in the face, The witest black guy you know, Oreo seems to be my denomination, Is it my fault that I say Fuck the NBA, it's the X-Games I'm chasin, Sorry though cuz busting gats, and chillin n the corner, it's my passion, Easily I'd rather meet my soulmate instead of out constantly smashin, Watchin my back for temptation, stumbling around for escape from my hell, Taking the hard road cuz the easy answer is giving in and re-combining with cells, I guess you could say that my sin to the world is not fittin the description, Breaking outta the system, hoping to prove that stereotypes on me are fiction... I just keyed this...tell me what to fix lol
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09-09-05, 03:29 PM | #6 | ||
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dont fix anythin...leave it like dat..keyed this in 10 minutes....
As I remember what I saw when I was sitting in those steps I recaptured the visions in my mind as I shivered on that death Didn’t kno what to do bloody tears came down my cheeks as his Did too........... didn’t have a clue but I wish I knew who did this So I shivered there….clueless on what to do in my rocking chair Cant sleep, or dream the nightmares take over me like an exorcist scare The sleepless nights kills me inside it just keeps going on and on and builds So scared on what to say or what I should do, scratches on my neck like gills And the fact just attacked me in my face and hands that I killed my brother In revenge that I killed myself when he also just did the same to my mother
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09-09-05, 03:34 PM | #7 | ||
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This should be OM of September. Til I drop my next OM lol.
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09-09-05, 05:58 PM | #8 | |
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werd....
fucka 15characters |
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09-09-05, 08:50 PM | #9 | ||
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what yall writin for?
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09-09-05, 09:30 PM | #10 | ||
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a collab...called our sins....
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09-10-05, 12:37 AM | #11 | ||
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anymore room for meh?
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09-10-05, 12:39 AM | #12 | |
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^Yeah... ima key mine soon
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09-10-05, 01:01 AM | #13 | ||
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k well what do i do 10 lines?
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09-10-05, 01:03 AM | #14 | |
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yea or w/e amount you wanna do
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09-10-05, 01:25 AM | #15 | ||
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i'll do like 12 or somin...
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