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07-29-03, 06:49 PM | #1 | |
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ill give open mic another try now that there is a new rule.....hopefully people dont sleep. and hopefully people actually read it
i posted this up a while back but i re-did it. i think its alot better now. some of the parts are the same but most of its diffrent. the lost identity cant tell friends from enemies the mask is slowly stabbing but he cant set it free he used to be the king of the mother fuckin streets till he got impeached his first taste of defeat he seem to weep alone in streams self pity cause he used to be a thug but its felling shity in obscurity he’s afraid to reach his final peak antisocial poet most have never heard him speak he seeks society but it seems to far away so he reaches out in songs so people feel his pain he tried to make a change but the sorrow still remains living in this game just trina find a better way everday waking up before sun rise checking if he still alive but wishing that he died why does my life coniside with these struggles i tried to muffle scream and my tears but its clear if i hold them in my pain wont ever dissapear dear life i write this letter hoping you get better in the sun shine no more stormy weather what ever happenes to me i just want you know let the addilesenace grow like a seed to a rose at time life get hard but you cant let it go thorns bring pain but the rose is still beautiful Last edited by C-section : 07-31-03 at 02:05 AM. |
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07-29-03, 07:27 PM | #2 | ||
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no bad uno, its alright, 6/10 cudda bin betta
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07-31-03, 02:04 AM | #3 | |
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wow. now that people cant give one line replys anymore i only get one reply and its only one line
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