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01-18-07, 10:24 PM | #1 | ||
New to RV
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skeptikal - untitled free write.
IP:
and I know you got the most beautiful eyez -
could only be compared to the most bluest of skyz - you always hurt me when your out with other guyz - the rich ones with there expensive suits n' tiez - if you could only see past this spreading disease - that fame and money our the keys to make us happy - then you would be peacefully living your life free - outside the magazine image and elogance the scene brings - so live with me, 'cause natures beautys clean - filled with pretty colors of green where the birds sing - and i mean, you can be what ever you want to be - anything you can think of, you can can always be - even if you think it's impossible, and could never be - give it time, and you'll see the possibility - Wrote pretty quick. Feedback appreciated. pm me when you have your two links and i iwll reopen this
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01-18-07, 10:48 PM | #2 | |
Flyweight
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IP:
you need two links, heres a piece of mine rtf
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=239072 its not bad for a quick key, you managed to cover a lot, but i think that it was a little random, and it sort of had a poetry feel to it...not sayin it is...but it felt better just talkin the script instead of tryin to put a beat to it, i think more consistant internals would be cool, cos most of the was end rhyme...but still its ight for a quick key and i look forward to reading a more concentrated drop from you... stay up fam...and dont forget to get your links...peace |
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