10 lines
spit now
no recycling/feeding
no c,h,d/r, bs votes
check in asap

good luck.....
peace

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lol fuk, i should of really said i already foudn an opponent but meh, im down for another battle...checkin in, good luck techs.

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cant even fix ur own lines…U just a technician on ban,
makin u lose and embarrassed, Call me the bakers man.
Like “Dolphins”s Dan, and Sundin, im ur unlucky 13,
U shit textcee, worst thing since the heat…outta Miami.
Probably…got ur “agency”…ghostwritin ur rhymes,
But ya’ll guh die, “soldiers” im killin n sendin up da sky.
Cuz u wanted 2 ride, wit me, So I sent ya off in a hurst,
But ur cursed, How u guh fynd god when u from the “31st”.
Like when ur condom bursts, dis b one bad Christmas for u,
Shit like poo, My gift just like ur AOL handle …"Death 2 U".


Ders my verse, good luck
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I'd key a hot verse up but against this bitch I'm prevented,
Cause dawg T-West battlin' with vets is just un-precidented
No Doubt my punches'll leave ya chest pressed and dented
Slap the fuckin' cuffs on this beetle like i arressted Lennon
Not even comin' hard cause I only got a little bit of a buzz
Plus you come wit more used lines than a cokehead does
You came to soft man you can't even match dialect I attatch
Knockin' you off stands and leavin' a scratch when I attack
Cracks in ya back, in battle i see you got tha whackest of stats
Facts are in tact, you prattle like'a baby whos wrapped in his fat

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this was a hate vote, you battled him yesterday and lost & are mad. go away. vote gone - feeble
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^ hate vote.............i'll get a mod in here.......and that vote dont count.................faggot................
uppn...........

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OMG!!!! HAHAAHAHAHHAHAH A HATE VOTE .. I DONT HATE YOU HAHAHAAH ARE YOU THAT COCKY THAT U THINK EVERYTIME YOU GET VOTED AGAINST ITS HATE ... EASY KILLER I DONT EVEN KNOW YOU WHY WOULD I HATE YOu .. YOU LOST THE BATTLE YOU LITTLE WHINY BITCH!!!!!!!!! GET A MOD IN HERE I DIDNT HATE AT ALL ....

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uppin, good battle techie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn x1
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Yea. Well first of all, was this a flow battle or somethin, cuz I saw no personals or punches that truly impressed me. Only thing that caught my eye in this battle was how good tech's flow and structure was. I dont think i've seen a verse with lines that even until now.

Lines worth mentioning:
Tech-

"I'd key a hot verse up but against this bitch I'm prevented,
Cause dawg T-West battlin' with vets is just un-precidented"

West-

"Like when ur condom bursts, dis b one bad Christmas for u,
Shit like poo, My gift just like ur AOL handle …"Death 2 U"."

And that wasnt too good^.

So overall, Im goin wit Tech. No hate. Tech...

Like “Dolphins”s Dan, and Sundin, im ur unlucky 13,
U shit textcee, worst thing since the heat…outta Miami

Hes from miami...marino played for miami, dolphins are miami

Probably…got ur “agency”…ghostwritin ur rhymes,
But ya’ll guh die, “soldiers” im killin n sendin up da sky.

Hes in the agency, hes in lyrical soldiers or he mentions it in his sig

Cuz u wanted 2 ride, wit me, So I sent ya off in a hurst,
But ur cursed, How u guh fynd god when u from the “31st”.

According 2 his profile, his b-day is october 31st, which is halloween

Wat was wrong wit my personals?

Flow- T West
Structure- Tech DEFINETLY
Punches- Tie..
Metas- Tech
Multis- Tech
Overall- Tech

Complete merking in my eyes although you weren't that bad t west... just elevate kid.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100161

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

ill never understand how 2 rap properly lol, anyways, thanks for the feedback and advice guys, keep em votes comin, maybe i can pull off one flukey one. Good job techie.

Uppin