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Old 12-21-03, 02:36 AM   #1
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Alright, heres the problem. I club battle every so often, and dont think im gloating, but when i freestyle and im on, then words come fast and i can keep up pretty well with my thoughts on what could finish this or that punch up. But, when i write, thoughts come fast but i usually end up not being able to get them all together like when i first thought of it, and it weakens it if anything. I dunno if people who have had this happend or knows about it, but is there a cure.?


put this in W.E.C. or a help forum if it dont belong.
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Old 12-21-03, 02:41 AM   #2
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Welcome to my world...ohh wait i cant freestyle

there at least 1 tutorial in WEC that i saw about how to better your freestyling...but to improve your writing...umm heres an idea

get a tape recorder and start to freestyle on what ever topic you want to

when your all said and done replay it and type/write it out...THEN pick it apart line by line and fix it as needed

its the easy way out!
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Old 12-21-03, 02:45 AM   #3
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cant record
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Old 12-21-03, 02:47 AM   #4
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little tape recorder...answering machine...cell phone voice mail
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Old 12-21-03, 02:47 AM   #5
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plus i dont wanna have to go threw a procedure every time i write. i wanna be able to sit on a crowded bus and still be able to think my thoughts and write them.
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Old 12-21-03, 02:48 AM   #6
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oh and no i dont ride a bus, it was an example lol
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Old 12-21-03, 02:51 AM   #7
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get those books that enhance your memory...
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Old 12-21-03, 02:57 AM   #8
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uh, thats probably against my religon.







lol but nah, im not that supersticous(spell-check.?)
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Old 12-21-03, 03:02 AM   #9
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i think you're pretty good already.
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Old 12-21-03, 03:24 AM   #10
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but i want to write for verbal, not text
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Old 12-21-03, 04:07 AM   #11
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hey, dont ask me. . i just close threads.
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Old 12-21-03, 04:32 AM   #12
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jot down the key words of your line

and it will prolly come back to you when u wanna use it for a line
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Old 12-21-03, 09:09 AM   #13
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It's really not that hard, dont concentrate as much on writing so it appeals to the people who read it, write for you and say what YOU want to say. THEN work it up with the multi's and such.
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Old 12-21-03, 10:25 AM   #14
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hey, dont ask me. . i just close threads.


Oh that was classic.

I need that to be the RB Moderator slogan.
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Old 12-21-03, 11:05 AM   #15
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^ Lmao.

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