my first battle on here.....

I got a bitch that got me ‘A-HEAD’ in the ‘game’ ‘DEAD-IN-THE-GAME’//
But now you just get ‘FED-IN-THE-GAME’ that’s ‘HEAD-ON-YOUR-BRAIN’//
If ‘dicks-were-gunz’, ‘sperm-was-seamen’ you’d have a ‘dick-in-your-ear//
See, you battling me is ‘LUDICRIS’ just like ‘CHICKEN-AND-BEER’//
I-show-no-fear, my rhymes are ‘darts’ so ill go ahead and ‘pin’ one//
Your verse had so many ‘holes’….I found ‘SADDAM’ hiding in one//
Im ‘RIPPIN’’ emcees like my ‘RHYME-BOOK’ when i got ‘WRITERS-BLOCK’//
I just ‘SMOKED-YOU-UP’ like an ‘OUNCE’ so now im ‘SPITTIN’’ ‘HOT-ROCKS’//
I got ‘HOT-DROPS’ like when I ‘FELL’ off the ‘empire state’//
Even if these cats were in a ‘LIFT’ they couldn’t ‘ELEVATE’//
So its time to ‘ABBRIEVIATE’ you ‘SHORT’ and you ‘W.A.C.K’//
I put ‘Arrows’ through MC’s ‘hearts’ so basically I ‘HEART-ATTACK’//
‘STOP’…’PAUSE’ don’t do a ‘J-Lo’ and put yourself on ‘PLAY’//
Im nicknamed ‘SPRINKLER’ around my way cos’ I ‘SPRAY’ in everyway//
You aint got no choice but to battle ‘VOKAL’, I know…its suicidal//
For you to even be in with a chance you need to pack 2 macks and a bible//
My ‘rhymes-are-my-weapons’ I attack with a ‘sight-on-my-lips’//
that’s why im ‘numero-uno’ in the ‘Eminem-Dot-Com-Battle-Championships’ //

lay your shit...

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This Guys 16 but he raps like hes 10/
Dog keep battlein me ill beat you over and over again/
Dog we can battle a million times bitch its whatever/
I could give you every good punchline and mc your lyrics still wouldn't be better/
This guys a bitch we all know he be wearin a tampon/
and when im with his girl we all know to who she clamp on/
dog I'll literally hand you your rap career/
You cant beat me does that make it a little clear/
dog your messin with a rhyme engineer/
bout to distribute fear/
no one knows you, you should just disapear/

Dog you know ur supposed to make this up on the spot unless you couldn't of typed it that fast man i think you pre-wrote it.

all right its time for votes lets see what the people think..................................aight nigga....

i aint pre-writing shit......i thought of that right then and there dawg......shit if i pre-wrote it it woulda be alot better than that..

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uppin......votes peeps............................................. ..................
we need votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Vokal rights, for obviously reasons, both of these were weak nevertheless because vokal rights was fearly off topic a little with the mad filler he had swimming his lines...an the newbie flow..*chuckles*..with all of this "" <-- in his lines just need to stop...anyways, nevertheless he did come better than his challenger which gains him this win.

vote - Vokal Rights

aight thanks....anymore votes....
im not sure bout the flow thing u said cos it flows good when i rap it.....which mad filler?

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...hheeh i agree about the mad filler part...mad filler...the reason everyone would think that shit is pre-written is clear cause you have no fuckin personals what so ever you don't even mention his name play with it ..you say nothing that you couldn't sit and write as a nuetral verse....you still win though cause your pre-written was better than his free-style..its not fair but its life..DONT START PRE-WRITIN LILPIMD....
P.S.- eminem ain't shit....so his rapbattles site prolly isn't either and if you wanna battle me pre write another one and we can do it later...peace...

nah son i aint pre-writing shit......its my first battle so i didnt do any personals cos i didnt no if this cat was ill, he coulda turned that shit around an killed me with it.....but shit, yeah ill battle you....

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Vokal Rights, you got an excuse for everything, the fact is the verse was pre written but it was better than the other noobs so just call this a lucky day and learn from your mistakes.
I give Vokal the win because the multi's were there and the punches stuck more.
The "mad filler" is the shit in your punches that doesn't make a reaction. Perhaps you were setting up a line to hit or you just needed it to rhyme. Either way. It's filler.
Good Battle Boys. Elevate.

w/e i didnt pre write it.....if you think i did then i dont really care....thanks for the feedback anyway........

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