iight check in soon
10 lines n up
u spit first
no d/r votes

hurry n check in

iight im checkin in give me few to drop ma shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........

yo dropz ya get copped by the worst merkers//
ill smerk that grin of ya face got ya think im mase//
chase ya through the ally ways make believe ya an italain gay//
kill ya with a butcher knife it symbols yo lyrics//
im mysteric i kill in 3 different stages//
im a docter givin u an abotiny cuz ya ass is whinin//
bitchin bout ya verses rotten gotten ya ass in a slump//
im'a user of bar shotguns i shape this with my trigger thumb//
ya mindle and numb so ya cant spit ill fuck ya up with my worst shit//

iight not all that great but that is my post...........

iight heres ma post..................
Im able to get dissed harder by triumph the dog//
ya lyrics get criteqed by the WB frog//
I frog on you, you just another newbie screwed//
Ill fuck you over worse than ya got cyber sex//
last week with the text tweeked and already written out//
ya cant do verbs compiled into your words he focuses//
on the entertainment of his other old folk herbs//
your bout to get merked worse than ya did in our street battle//
which matter of fact it was ya first and ya final//
midols not a depressent so quit reflectin back to it//
iraqi soldiers travilen back while vitalz is gettin courted//
from sadams crack to bin ladens ball sack//
a ball bat beats ya less harder than your own verses//
he's a newbie who battles with the shit he rehearses with//
r&b demandin a court order for a divorce//
I said 10 lines and he's 1 line short//
Im the dividend and hes the quotent//
Ill decicrete ya ass and tape it like a special moment//

i took it easy on ya ass........

uppin fo votes1x



peepz drop an honest vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100097

uppin fo some votes
2x




http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100097

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iight just cuz this is a weak battle dont sleep on it





http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100097

opener: dropz
closer: tie
punches: dropz
structure: tie
vocab: tie
wordplay: vitalz
overall: dropz

both y'all need to fix your structures an elevate!!!

peace

iight uppin fo votes 3x




http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100097

yo
opener d
flow d
injoyment d
pounches d
closer d

overall vote Dropz

no hate jus a vote return the favour of time

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100636

peace

uppin fo votes 3x

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First off the line min is 10 and Vitalz dropped 9. But Dropz took this anyway. He got personals, punches, and metas. Tie on structure and flw. Honest votes here please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100988

uppin fo some more votes jst get this battle outta the way>.................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ............................

drops took this battle all the way no need to explain

he had better flow punches more mulits and everything

vote Drops

keep it real and return the favor

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101238