10 lines
spit whenever
no bull shit votes
~peace~


checkin in

Your freestyles are cold as a fuckin frozen lake 2000000 miles off da equater/
My lines are beams like star wars , your a bad dude and Im darth vader/
I spit shit that come at you fast, like blast, your being harrased, smoked, and passed/
By me dis battle will be smashed and bashed , Im the future this battle is tha past/
Your lines suck at flowin you suck at big dick, and you are a little fag on da rag/
I read yo profile and yo open mics and dude no offense but you lick bag/
When I read dt shit I though you was a 5 year old trien to act old//
You suck at text battlin no matter 14 font , italic, or fuckin big and bold/
My rhymes flow, your dont you ho, sick mo fo, He worked at prostitut co./
I used to like you Not no mo , You suck at stylin get off dis site, leave, Damn go!/
Oh Damn! he got 1 KO agaist a faget named fuckin ( ben hated )///
A week or two ago I though yo rhymes good then ( they faded)////

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I can be nice but dont make me mad....cause when I loose control.......your dead !!

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yo homie is you gonna spit or not I aint got all year.................its weird Im in two battles and our battles tha one I didnt try on and you still aint replyin ........what the fuck is this " Dont reply ro lyrical killers shit" day or sumthin??? DAMN drop yo shit

__________________
"The Legion" takes no prisoners!

I can be nice but dont make me mad....cause when I loose control.......your dead !!

my site:



http://freestyleman.proboards25.com/index.cgi

you let me post the rules homo
i said post anytime
shut the fuck up!
i'ma drop soon anyway
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there should be a 30 min drop rule otherwise handcuffs has a month haha

good drop lyerical killer

thanx and nigga handcuffs you shut the fuck up man I aint yo lil bitch if ya want anyone to vote then ya gotta hurry and post so dont tripp lil bitch!!!!!

__________________
"The Legion" takes no prisoners!

I can be nice but dont make me mad....cause when I loose control.......your dead !!

my site:



http://freestyleman.proboards25.com/index.cgi

just cuz you're from florida, that don't make you hot,
your rhymes flow a little less than blood through a clot,

you get lost in my verbal abilities, isn't it a-maze-ing,
they have your eyes attched to the screen glazing,

your verse wouldn't be complex if you wrote in matricies,
it must be hard to think in 98 fucken degrees,

there is only one way you could be wanted for this shit,
stand in a police station, scream real loud and unload a full clip,

I'm spittin punches, like an 8th grader who can't handle alcahol,
you can't beat me, but you claim i'm coming to a down-ward fall,

~peace~


*he is from florida-hot
*down-ward fall-he says my rhymes are fadin'
*98 degrees-hot in florida

^^^^^ i ain't trippin'


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__________________
"The Legion" takes no prisoners!

I can be nice but dont make me mad....cause when I loose control.......your dead !!

my site:



http://freestyleman.proboards25.com/index.cgi

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__________________
"The Legion" takes no prisoners!

I can be nice but dont make me mad....cause when I loose control.......your dead !!

my site:



http://freestyleman.proboards25.com/index.cgi

Opener- HC
Structure- HC
Punches- HC
Vocab HC-
Closer- HC
Vote- Hand cuffs

An honest vote
Return da fava
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100706

iight lets see..

flow-lyrical
punches-hand
personals-lyrical
consistancy-hand
ill line/weak line ratio-hand

lyrical u got the flow down, and u had some kool shit, but u would go from saying something kool to sayin some shit like you lick bag and would start to get somewhat simple.. stick to the personals and punches dont force the flow, cuz u have a nice one and some potential u just gotta work with it.. hand.. you were the opposite.. you have the foundation for nice punches.. but your flow is somewhat simple.. but since this is a battle you did have the more thought out idea's.. and altho this was close.. you held a little more pound for punch.. work on your flow and u can have something goin for ya.. both are not bad.. but handcuff edged this.. vote-hand can you's vote on cs vs theunderrated when he posts??? it'd be appreciated, honest votes please, holla

I didn't like either verse, but lyrical actually had sum aight content. hand your punches were too simple, flow needs work too. I didn't see one hard punch in ya verse while lyrcal came with abunch of disses and had a more enjoyable verse. vote=lyrical

peep my sig and vote, if you want.

wak battle
style/hanscuffs
wordplay/handcuffs
punches/handcuffs
personals/handcuffs
yo i thought both were good,but handcuff had better verse overall
vote/handcuffs

thanks to the people tht voted
uppin'
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