give us some feed on this track aiight, n its with my new condenser m with my new mixer, the mixer settings werent so great, but just gimme some feed...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/v...ctionsmusic.htm

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uppin lol

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nice shit

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thanks..... uppin for more...

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nice collab man

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this was good...like to see more

aiight... thanks.. uppin for more!!!

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Yo nice track, the hook needs alot of work If ya want me to sing a hook on this Id do it fo ya.. but nice track Peace....btw Id do somthin Nate Dawgish fo it... Peace

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Nate doggish would be dope... But neways thanks duce... Uppin 4 more...

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Flow on first verse is INSANELY sloppy, you sound like u got rocks in your mouth.

Hook - bad, add a "chorus" effect to it

second - omg, it gets worse..

*press stop*

second kids flow is just real awefull....first kid is somewhat there but not, needs to get the rocks out his mouth....

um...second cat is not good right now, elevate man, keep at it

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Aiight... Thanks alka... Uppin for more feedback!!!

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Beat was nice... Quality was pretty good... But dog turn the vocals way down... its to loud... Flow is choppy, and barely on beat... off more then on. Lyrics werent really good. Rhymes were simple. You need more emotion and a way better flow... Practice your verse until you got it perfect then record it. And instead of reading it memorise it. It'll improve ya flow tons and your emotion will be better... Keep spittin...

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my bad I peeped the top track on the page not the one wit Meth.

return tha favour
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...threadid=101541

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beat was ok....not that great......first emcee sounds like he's babbling words....almost mumbling....you need to fix your vocals and your delivery.....hook is cliche....in other words it's trash....and try editing and copying when you do your hooks...hook was also terrible..second emcee is just as horrible as the first one....lyrics from both emcees were garbage (my honest opinion).....both flows were choppy...definitely off flow like crazy throughout the whole song.....ya need more experience recording and definitely need experience in the production facility (lol)......nuff said....OnE





I'm Ghost...

aiight... uppin for more..

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yea like my man above said... your words aint too clear. you shud take some words out of your bars to be able to spit the other ones more clearly and precise. it was hard for me to understand most of the words. the beat was aigh tho. but in overall im not feeling it.