gimme some tips, im not so great yet... but i think this beat is decent, its basically looped..

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/v...productions.htm

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Lissin.............

OK this is to basic it was ok for a 1st few but after that it got real old part of your problem is the beat is not dyanimic enough, noth think enough wit good dynaimc sounds... let me guess this beat has under 10 sounds... some of my beats have 50 or more.. that is what gives it depth... well part of it... its alot of layering.. and then alot of mixing and sound engineering. then mastering in T Racks... anyways if ya want some personal Help Ill help ya out. on aim hit me up if ya want Peace

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do you realize you have fuckin fire right here. not yet. but with some modifications. throw some trumpets some synth and some change ups. a lil bit more percusssion............. its to repetitive. but shit.. you should follow through. the rythm has commercial appeal. and thats whats most important. stay up

thanks both, im still new, barly started like 2mnths ago... just still tryin to learn, n yea, i only used drums, n that one sound.... thanks though... uppin for more...

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U got sum decent shit here man. Peep sum of my beats when u get tha chance. Maybe we should collab on a beat idea one day and shit. Holla back at me.

thanks man.. uppin for more....

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hmmm...the synth hit is aight. but could use more shit. just to vary it up a bit.

the kick kinda fades into the background though. maybe a harder kick would help it stand out against the synth hit. maybe add sum more cymbals/high hats/ or rim shots to fill up the space a bit.

like post said though. that synth hit is a high quality sound/commercial sound. n it's right in line wit the current style. keep workin on it. 1

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thanks man... i got that synth from that one site, where they email u samples... n all there samples have been high quality so far... its pretty dope... i'll try to put some more shit in, n re-post it... but thanks though phate...

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i liked some of yo beats.i was fealin em.

um no. keep practicing.

very catchy melody on freestyle beat. keep it up, see if u can throw some more in there. i dont even know where to start but experiment. overall, good effort. check me out

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/nomicsproductions

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fuk u... at least gimme tips...


u actually think ima give u feed...

n for nomics... thansk man.. i'll try to peep it as soon as possible...

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yeah that shit was ott u need to keep it up and i live in san jose if u got any good songs i can hook u up wit a deal

whre in san jose u live???

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