Aragorn-True Story
Emerge-Influence
Tilleydie-Freestyle

*Sample…
Jay Z
I Love Girls, Girls, Girls…

*scratch*
Wait Hold Up.. Listen How Can You Love One Of These..
When It Comes To Girls All I Gotta Say Is Bitch Please..

When I Think Of Girls.. Nothing Good Ever Comes To Mind..
They Come In Different Sizes, But Their All The Same Kind..
My Words Lead Tto The Hatred Felt By Others When I Spit..
Leave Bitches Ripped, Put Her In Her Place If She Gives Lip..
And I Don’t Mean Giving Me Head..... Like I Care About Her..
Only Time You Really Need A Girl... Is When You Mount Her..
But I Doubt Her, Because They Become Attached To Quickly..
Bitch Couldn’t Touch Me, Unless She Were To Try To Hit Me..
But I Aint Sweating...... Because I Would Never Strike Back..
Never Physically Hit Her, Just Drop Her Name On A Clap Back..
It’s Like Rapping Whack, No One Will Ever Show You Respect..
Feelings Never Resurrect, Drop Ya Ass, What Else You Expect?..

Chorus
Looking For A Super Hero.... But You Gotta Know You’re a Zero..
I Mean If It Was Up To Me, I Would Never Be This Bitches Hero..
This Girls Looking For A Super Hero..And This I Would Never Be..
This Is Because All You're Really Good For Is To Suck On These..

You Think Your Better Then Me….. I Never Liked Your Ass Anyways..
From Night To Days…. You Will Never Expect The Next Lyrical Blaze..
Leave You Burnt, From That Which Radiates When I Flip On The Mic..
Test Me, And I Leave You Thinking Of The Pros Of Becoming A Dyke..
What I Write… Is Just A Small Portion Of What I Feel When I See You..
Mistreat You.. Would Be A Better Outcome Then Anything I Would Do..
If You Only Knew, What, Now Your Better Then Me Is That The Truth..
One Clue.. Better Find Yo Soul Mate While You Still Have Your Youth..
Because, That’s The Only Thing You Got Going For You And I Mean It..
Think I’m Bluffing, Just Try To Find Your Number, Bet You Its Deleted..

Chorus
Looking For A Super Hero.... But You Gotta Know You’re a Zero..
I Mean If It Was Up To Me, I Would Never Be This Bitches Hero..
This Girls Looking For A Super Hero..And This I Would Never Be..
This Is Because All You're Really Good For Is To Suck On These..

Last Verse And I Still Have More To Say, Haven’t Even Started To Curse..
Fuck This.. Bitch She Aint Shit To Me.. Leave Me Strapped Like A Purse..
Now., This Bitch Is Caught Up In My Game Trying To Ride Off My Fame..
But You Aint Got Game.. Shit You Think This Verse Hurts, Feel My Pain..
…...Because You Think You Can Play Me And Still Come Back For More..
Shit Bitch, I Should Expose Everyone 2 The Truth, She’s Really A Whore..
Dare I Say More, Naw… I Think I Took A Big Enough Chunk Out Of You..
So I Just Got One More Thing To Say, Take This As A Warning.. Fuck You..

Chorus
Looking For A Super Hero.... But You Gotta Know You’re a Zero..
I Mean If It Was Up To Me, I Would Never Be This Bitches Hero..
This Girls Looking For A Super Hero..And This I Would Never Be..
This Is Because All You're Really Good For Is To Suck On These..

*Well Chorus Is Playing In The Background*
Girl’s Don’t Take This Personal... This Is Nothing Against You..
This Is Just For Those Bitches, Who Think They Can Play You..

One Love Girls.. Aint Nothing Better Then The Sweet Taste Of A Women..
And I Mean It.. *laughs* pz…

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lol this diss to broads is tight

haha im making one too but its gonna be audio and its directed to a certain broad

anyway tight shit you know its dope since i ghostwrit most of this

peace out

u didnt ghost write shit u just jealous of my talent

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dam ryan just because u cant get any dont meen u needa make a diss about them...it wont up ur chances of getting one...

anywayz it was nice...sometimes the flow was a bit off but other than that it was pretty good

Pz

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INFINITES MP3'S

yeah i liked the topic....lol....stuck to it nicely too....but why you feel this way.... women are good..lol........quite a good drop...pZ

Uppin

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come on up

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...I Think Every Guy Makes A Version Of This Song In Some Form At Some Point In Thier Life...
...Mines Is Much More Violent, Lol...
...This Was Nice - But Wordplay And Metas Were Missing Here...
...Stay Elevatin'...
...One...

aight, here my part

the flow to this was nicley done, the rhyme scheme you used was done very well. reading this picece was not too had and relating to it was also easy. Now the bad part...some of your rhymes were basic...and i mean BASIC... the hook was a nice idea, but hero 2 times in 2 lines was not a good idea...

about once or twic you used the same word to rhyme with itself...come on man...your better than this

good drop none the less, and if that bitch keep getting on your nerves, bring her to my house

^^ haha.. it wasn't really a me trying to do a sick open mic.. it was a me venting my anger out on this girl..
but thanks for the criticism.. now i will return to my regular self and drop dope open mics like you hah pz

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